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  • Falak

    February 7, 2022 at 8:18 AM

    In introduction, thesis statement is missing

    this activity which ultimately causing lot of problems like plastic packaging is a (one of the serious) health hazards for our natural habitat,

    it will affect those companies who (which) are producing the packaged goods

    word “goods” could be replaced by : commodities, products

    by people who believes (believe) in the sustainable development

    Hence, it’s the consumers ultimately which could make a difference towards the usage of packaged goods. (here the word ” ultimately” directing that consumers only can control this practice and hence , it is contradicting the conclusion, which is stating both are equally responsible)

    Example in B.P 1, would be appreciated

    Keep writing!!

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