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Few weeks before travelling to Manali, I went to Bangalore with my cousin. I bought a Sonata watch from the mall. As you know Bangalore is famous for electronic products therefore I bought watch to gift it to one of my friend.
Unfortunately, After returning from Manali, I’m not able to find my watch. The last thing I remember is keeping the watch inside your bag. The watch is from 2009 addition, golden colour with a black strap. (these two paragraphs can come under bullet point regarding describe the watch and it can be rearranged as following
Unfortunately, After returning from Manali, I’m not able to find my watch. The last thing I remember is keeping the watch inside your bag. Few weeks before travelling to Manali, I went to Bangalore with my cousin. I bought a Sonata watch from the mall. The watch is from 2009 addition, golden colour with a black strap. . As you know Bangalore is famous for electronic products therefore I bought watch to gift it to one of my friend.)
There is one of my friend (friends)
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