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  • Falak

    Administrator
    February 10, 2022 at 8:51 AM
    660 Network Points
    Activity Points 26550

    danger (Danger) bells

    Due to this there is a (are) lots of burden on shoulders of government

    As par (per) senior citizens are concern . (,) Government has to review

    Growing population of veterans effects (affects) the gross domestic product –

    instead of using “oldster” repeatedly “elderly” can be used.

    Coherence and cohesion has been clearly observed.

    No example found and more importantly, conclusion is missing in the essay.

    Band: 3/6

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