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For illustrates, (To illustrate)
applying uniform rules to all employee. (employees)
I really struggle (struggled)
there are some disadvantages of wearing uniform like staff of the companies can feel discomfort due to safety shoes as the weight of this particular shoes is much more as compared to our regular shoes
Moreover, there will be lack of motivation (owing to the fact , wearing uniform at workplace leads to) to monotonous nature in companies.
employees (employees’) safety
Task achievement, CC has been observed. Lexical resources need bit of attention , may use less common words . Sentence structure had limited range.
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Band: 3.5/6
