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  • Falak

    Administrator
    February 21, 2022 at 11:54 PM
    660 Network Points
    Activity Points 27170

    i (I) purchased brand new Iphone

    from your website (It was received in a broken condition) received was not in good condition.

    Early this week (,) i (I) placed a (an) order of Iphone

    phone case (these) were delivered yesterday (and to my surprise) was not functioning properly

    sentences are incomplete, thus lacks cohesion and grammatical accuracy and range also needs to be consider.

    Keep writing!!

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