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i (I) purchased brand new Iphone
from your website (It was received in a broken condition) received was not in good condition.
Early this week (,) i (I) placed a (an) order of Iphone
phone case (these) were delivered yesterday (and to my surprise) was not functioning properly
sentences are incomplete, thus lacks cohesion and grammatical accuracy and range also needs to be consider.
Keep writing!!
