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  • Falak

    March 4, 2022 at 8:48 AM

    college is mandatory to (for) successful career,

    which is helps (which helps) them to acquire real time experience

    one of my friend(s)

    after working there (for) 3-4 years, now he is promoted to assistant level job which helps him to (become) stable financially

    After completing their higher education, they can get equally paid job (needs more explanation, to establish cohesion)

    one of my colleague(s)

    band: 4/6

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