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  • Falak

    March 9, 2022 at 5:30 PM

    blood sports are always criticized due to inhuman (behavior)

    I undoubtedly believe that these kind of sports should be treated as illegal and should (there is need to) educate the people more about it therefore (to prevent) we can prevent these kind of activities happening in future.

    As a illustration (,) in the Southern part of India

    festival called Jallikattu were (where) they

    it encourages the people to continue the (these) sports.

    For instance(,) in some part of Africa

    it’s necessary to (for) the Authorities to take certain action to prevent (safeguard) the animals.(from such brutal activities)

    Make sure to use punctuation wherever required.

    Band: 3.5/6

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