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  • Falak

    Administrator
    March 14, 2022 at 6:00 PM
    660 Network Points
    Activity Points 26550

    ,the government plays a (an) important role in maintaining (keeping) the environment safe and healthy.

    stopping plastic waste from entering and contaminating water outlets (bodies) people are able to save drinking water and the natural habitat (for aquatic life)

    such activities are more easy to educate people about the important (importance) of protecting the nature.

    In conclusion(,) the government should

    paraphrasing could be done effectively , avoid copying language from question

    paragraphing has not been done as required , 2 views are presented in one paragraph; not advised.

    second body paragraph seems to be distorted as it is the off-topic.

    sentence range needs to be considered.

    Band: 2.5/6

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