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  • Falak

    March 20, 2022 at 5:41 PM

    Try to follow the essay structure as discussed in class, different headings for example are not required.

    In order to establish more coherence, you could talk about how punishment can affect students adversely , I believe that would do even more justice to question as well as to answer. Second body paragraph could be developed with explanation.

    keep writing!!

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