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access to obscenic content to (by) children
however by following strategies like checking the authenticity of websites before sharing the sensitive information and government enforcing the vigilant rules to ban or restrict vulnerable websites. (these issues can be mitigated)
tech giant facebook (Facebook)
Furthermore (,) internet has paved the way
must be carefull (careful)
Try to manage the question in 40 minutes. Repetitive usage of vocabulary has been observed, make use of synonyms and rephrase the sentences.