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Although separate cabins can be pleasant to work, but (avoid) employees can get influenced from distractions like social networking sites, which (and it) can bring their productivity down.
stop spreading due to this employee(s) were asked to
To conclude, although open-space design has its advantages like employee interaction, team building and low operational cost; however, in the pandemic’s viruses can spread easily which can affect organization profits. I believe these advantages outweigh disadvantages. (To conclude, although operational costs and exposure to viruses is more prevalent in open space layouts , these can be handled with suitable measures; however, the advantages like employee interaction , team building certainly outweigh the drawbacks)
Feedback : great improvement, try to improvise first B.P as well keep writing!!
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