FalakAdministratorMarch 29, 2022 at 8:35 AM
However, after (no need of “after” here) the consecutive rainfall for past 24 hours has resulted in leaking of water from roof
expected to deteriorate further due to the upcoming of winter season. (upcoming winter season)
I hope the issues are (will be ) addressed
make sure you explain all the three bullet points in distinct paragraphs.