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while overseas education has some benefits and ( , there are some) drawbacks (too)
it makes them more flexibility (flexible) to adapt the change.
however, overseas education has some disadvantages. (as well)
although (Although) overseas education is good (,) but (“but” is not required) it ( costs a fortune at the same time))is expensive at the same time
Make sure the first letter of the word after period is capital.
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