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Actually, one of my neighbour(s) residing in flat no.1 of the same building is playing(plays) loud music till late(at) night. I do not raise this issue, if it is once in a while during long holidays or weekends. This has become regular every night and it disturbs my sleep a lot.
Due to disturbed sleep, I was(am) not able to concentrate in(on) my work through out(throughout) the day. Hope you can understand how drowsy (a person feels)people become due to lack of sleep. Since I am preparing for my upcoming examination it gives me too much trouble in studying for the same.
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