do mention units of measurement in introduction.
In overview, the word ” steady” has been used repeatedly, especially at places where it is not even required.
Body paragraph 1 is not effective , as it does not include any data and figures. Moreover, the sentence structure is also a point to consider.
Tense should be maintained through out.
Band: 1/3
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