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  • Falak

    Administrator
    April 20, 2022 at 7:46 AM
    720 Network Points
    Activity Points 31540

    do mention units of measurement in introduction.

    In overview, the word ” steady” has been used repeatedly, especially at places where it is not even required.

    Body paragraph 1 is not effective , as it does not include any data and figures. Moreover, the sentence structure is also a point to consider.

    Tense should be maintained through out.

    Band: 1/3

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