AdministratorApril 20, 2022 at 7:46 AM720 Network PointsActivity Points 31540
do mention units of measurement in introduction.
In overview, the word ” steady” has been used repeatedly, especially at places where it is not even required.
Body paragraph 1 is not effective , as it does not include any data and figures. Moreover, the sentence structure is also a point to consider.
Tense should be maintained through out.