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  • Falak

    Administrator
    April 20, 2022 at 6:50 PM
    720 Network Points
    Activity Points 31700

    paraphrasing should have all the elements mentioned in question

    future prospectus (prospects)

    it (they) can develop (explore/understand foreign culture…. ) a good bond

    . Although there are many Universities in Europe, parents spend their earnings on their kids to develop their better education. (the usage of “although” is not justified)

    European universities could be covered under example

    cohesion is missing somehow, conclusion is not effective.

    sentence structure should be improved.

    Band: 2.5/6

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