AdministratorApril 20, 2022 at 6:50 PM720 Network PointsActivity Points 31700
paraphrasing should have all the elements mentioned in question
future prospectus (prospects)
it (they) can develop (explore/understand foreign culture…. ) a good bond
. Although there are many Universities in Europe, parents spend their earnings on their kids to develop their better education. (the usage of “although” is not justified)
European universities could be covered under example
cohesion is missing somehow, conclusion is not effective.
sentence structure should be improved.