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  • Aanchal

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    April 22, 2022 at 7:56 PM
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    There are people who believe a growing children should have a sense of competition, others believe teaching children cooperation is more important as it allows them to function well in their life. In my opinion, I believe children should focus on cooperation so that they serve society. In this essay I will provide Both the view points and logical conclusion.

    People emphasising on competition because they see it as a source of upgradation of knowledge and growth. As When an individual is Competing against the other person, they work on their weakness and analyse the strengths of competitor. For instance, in competition people develop skills which they couldn’t developed when they had no competition.

    However, other view that cooperation is key to peace of mind and self-awareness. When a child learns to work in teams, all of them grow together. Also, there is no mental stress. For example, studies have shown those who are working with people are emotionally intelligent as result they contribute to uplift society.

    In conclusion, people keep on working themselves in competition, whereas, those who cooperate lead a more peaceful life. However, mental health should be top priority and same should be taught to children so that they lead healthy life.

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