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  • Falak

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    April 28, 2022 at 11:26 PM
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    , I feel there is a greater need to this cause is that these skills- faulty structure

    and prepares (prepare) them for the real world – because subject is “skills”

    Lack of cohesive devices, hence cohesion has been compromised.

    They (These additions/skills/activities) not only build up mental and psychological resilience

    Feedback : There is strong need to work on sentence structure, as range is missed throughout.

    Keep writing!!

    Band: 2.5/6

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