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, I feel there is a greater need to this cause is that these skills- faulty structure
and prepares (prepare) them for the real world – because subject is “skills”
Lack of cohesive devices, hence cohesion has been compromised.
They (These additions/skills/activities) not only build up mental and psychological resilience
Feedback : There is strong need to work on sentence structure, as range is missed throughout.
Keep writing!!
Band: 2.5/6
