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one of the main reason(s)
population are (is) increasing day by day
people who works (work) in
so people (don’t) no need to shift
this could helps (help) to
can strictly follow(ed) by citizens
this will also reduced (reduce) traffic congestion.
reconstruct (reconstruction)
traffic jam becomes (has become) problem in metropolitan cities
feedback : Continuous usage of short sentences. Try to work on sentence structure, grammar accuracy (subject- verb agreement) . Lexical resources should be improved.
Band: 2/6