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The chart represents the ground on which individuals choose whether to travel to work by a car or bicycle.
The first chart illustrates various reasons for cycling to work. Mostly, people prefer cycling because it directly helps them to maintain a healthy physical health, with 30% of the individuals citing this as the most important reason. Next, 30% think cycling cuts down on the emission of polluting gases. Furthermore, 15% look at this as a way of saving a huge amount of time by not having to worry about parking. Also, 13% pointed out that cycling is cost effective. 12% mentioned they don’t get stuck in traffic and reach their destination faster.
The second chart talks about the basis on which people decide to use a car to work. We can see that 40% think of driving as a comfortable mode of travel, whereas earlier we saw that 30% chose cycling to stay fit. Also, the distance to reach work can be covered faster than on a bicycle, which is believed by 21% of the population. Compared to the previous chart, where 12% believe that a bicycle takes us to places faster, 14% think otherwise in this chart. A car can carry numerous essential things to work, which is consented by 14% of the population. In addition to that, 11% find cars safer than cycling.
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