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  • Falak

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    May 6, 2022 at 8:36 AM
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    master of business administrator (administration) from

    especially in body paragraph 1, all the sentences are connected by “which” – monotonous sentence structure.

    pupils can able ( either go for “can” or ” be able” ) to learn basic expertise

    second body paragraph is dedicated to benefits of online learning not why some people think job is good right after school, hence response is tangential with the question.

    Band: 2.5/6

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