There should be two feature paragraphs, 4 paragraphs in total
the expenditure of (on) consumer goods
Further(,) more than 400.000 pounds
UK cost (spent) less than France
make use of subordinating words to convey the comparison even better.
Keep writing!!
Band: 2/3
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