Feedback : Do mention units of measurements in introduction.
after (a) while
rise after august (August)
it (was) raise(d)
in two feature paragraphs , data has been presented effectively , but comparison and grouping is missing.
Try to establish comparisons between demand and production.
Keep writing!!
Band: 2/3
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