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  • Falak

    June 5, 2022 at 9:10 PM

    vocabulary (society, capital punishment, criminals)

    For starters, (To commence with,)

    Feedback : Task achievement and coherence is clearly visible. Though Lexical resources definitely need to be improved as many words have been used repeatedly. You may try the synonyms or sometimes sentence structure can help.

    Keep writing!!

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