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  • Falak

    June 6, 2022 at 8:37 AM

    The person who commits a wrongful crime is being awarded by the court authorities or ruling countries depend on what crime they had committed. This essay agrees with the statement. Although many people had committed different types of crimes and stricter laws needs to be implemented in this country. ( the sentences and the ideas behind these are somehow incomplete)

    if we say about Texas school shooting in the United States as mentioned in the BBC News (,)the shooter was bullied during his school days

    This happens because gun laws in the United States is (are) not much strict as followed in other countries.

    Feedback : The entire essay is tangential to the question, crimes and current situation has been mentioned. Hardly any sentence is talking about capital punishment, the main question.

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