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  • isha

    Administrator
    June 14, 2022 at 4:32 PM

    The bar graph depicts the popularity of celebrities by showing the number of influencers in millions in the years 2018 and 2021.

    Overall, the number of Instagram followers was around 100 million for all the popular personalities and sharply increased for each one in the year 2021.

    In 2018, Selena Gomez had the highest number of followers with a total of approximately 125 million. On the other hand, The Rock and Kylie Jenner had the lowest numbers, which is nearly 90 million followers. Cristiano Ronaldo and Ariana Grande had almost the same number of followers in 2018. That is about 110 million.

    The number of followers in 2021 had increased tremendously for Cristiano Ronaldo with the highest of approximately 310 millions followers. The lowest in the trend was Selena Gomez, with almost 240 million followers. All the other influencers show the same digit, that is 250 million.

    The bar graph clearly shows that each celebrity’s popularity had increased at a very high pace since 2018; they have touched or are near 250 million in 2021; the exception here is Criastiano Ronaldo whose popularity had beaten all records and gone above 300 million followers on Instagram.

    – Few grammatical errors.

    -Try to write your graph in past when dates are given.

    -Use cohesive devices.

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