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safeguarding our society (some word related to environment will be more appropriate here)
laws to maintain our surrounding, however, (however is not necessary as “while” is serving the purpose)
Regulatory authority (repetitive usage)
private vehical’s (vehicles) on road
laws laid of (by) government a success
when it comes to taking care of their 9own) and everyone’s health,
their surrounding’s (surroundings) clean
f vehicals. (vehicles)
citizen’s (citizens)
does not (do not) understand the importance
Need to understand “apostrophe” usage, be careful with spellings
Keep writing!!
band: 3/6