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Nowadays, kids at the age of 3 to 6 are sent to school for legitimate reasons, but few people propose to begin schooling only after 7 years. I support commencing education as early as possible, and this essay will discuss both aspects, justifying the argument for starting education at an early age.
Indeed, it is very easy for toddlers to learn new concepts and adapt to new environment compared to older children due to their faster brain development. They are inquisitive and energetic, and it can be difficult for parents to help and nurture them effectively. Schools teach discipline, nourish language abilities, and enhance analytical and logical skills in a professional way compared to the tactics of inexperienced parents. For instance, learning disabilities like dyslexia or autism can be quickly identified by trained staff and may be corrected if found in advance.
On the other hand, children should not be forced to learn multiple things, as each student is unique and takes his/her time to learn. Overburdening them with home work and exams is not a good idea, which will unnecessarily induce stress and anxiety for students and their families. Furthermore, younger ones (take time to express themselves) would not have learnt to express themselves and convey the issues or problems they go through. Hence, it is important that parents spend time with kids rather than relying on outsiders.
In conclusion, though there are some cons in sending children to educational institutions early, it can have a positive impact on them if institutions are able to balance the emotional needs of each pupil. Hence, I encourage the idea of ensuring systematic coaching in advance.
Feedback:
-Introduction and BP 1 is fine. Clarity and paraphrasing is there in the intro.
– BP2 topic sentence and concluding lines of same paragraph are not in sync.
-Conclusion can be more clear .
– Use some not so common vocabulary words.
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