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of migrating adolescent(s)
culture of people from different background (,) furthermore, they learn to cope with the difficulties themselves.
Moreover (,) it boosts their confidence to live in any circumstances
students has to (have to) learn English
it creates scarcity of skilled student(s) which result(s) talent crunch in their own mother land.
. On one hand, it creates scarcity of skilled student which result talent crunch in their own mother land. The development of the nation depends upon the youngsters. – these two ideas lack cohesion , perhaps one connector is required to complete or link them properly.
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Band: 3.5/6
