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  • Falak

    August 30, 2022 at 10:34 PM

    To a great extent (,) I agree with the statemen

    sentence (sentenced) capital punishment to five gangster(s)

    who was (were) having murder, looting and rape charges,

    suddenly the crime rate drop (dropped) down

    it will definitely terrify to (“to” is not required) the offender before

    the robbery (was) avoided.

    the criminal saves (saved) him

    Feedback : Task achievement , coherence and cohesion is there though I believe response includes mainly compound sentences , try to add range in structures , and there is need to go through past tense. Certain words were repetitive (looting, brutal ) otherwise effort in lexical resources is appreciated.

    Keep writing !!

    Band: 4/6

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