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, criminal activities (have) become a major issue
who has (have) been
who came (come) across
capital punishment should (will) increase crime rate
in (to) higher level.
to developed (develop)and build a strong country.
govt. have (has) to also worked (work) on
feedback : Use proper paragraphing (introduction , different body paragraphs), second reason has not been developed fully and is looking for further explanation. Make use of complex structures and even work on basic sentence formation
Band: 2.5/3
