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This bar charts describes that leisure activities done by Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists
on holidays in Greece in August 2019.
Overall, Chinese people spent their most of time reading books while Brazilian spent their time on beaches.Chinese and American tourists have spent most of their times reading books for 8 hours and 5 hours respectively where as Turkish and Brazilian have spent 4 hours reading books. Chinese and American tourists have not visited places and Turkish and Brazilian have spent around 3 hours in visiting places.
Turkish and Brazilian have been at beach for 6 and 5 hours respectively. moreover, American and Chinese have spent very less time in visiting places .Turkish and Brazilian have been at the beach for around 4-5 hours however they have spent their most of time in doing leisure activities.
-Try to write more while comparing in 2nd para.
-Use more adverbs and adjectives, example- comparatively, gradually, exponentially, etc.
Overall= 2/3
