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    Ayesha

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    July 25, 2021 at 7:56 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Feeling of competition)

    Many people believe that competitiveness must be inculcated in kids, on the contrary some reckon on teaching to become cooperative. This being a very sensitive topic, needs to be meticulously taken into consideration as both these dimensions of behavior of kids are essential to be learnt. This essay will have the importance of Competition and Cooperation, in children, explained.

    To begin with, there are many situation in everybody’s life where they need to behave appropriately. Living in this world of cut-throat competition for success and accomplishments, kids ought to be encouraged for being competitive. For a good future in many industries and professions one thing which is constant is competition. In order to prepare children for the same, a sense of being better than the others needs to exist in their minds. Teaching this is very beneficial. For example, a boy takes part in a race with the primary aspiration to win. If he doesn’t feel encouraged enough to defeat the other participants he won’t win therefore will be disheartened. So encouraging kids is required at such points of time.

    Coming to the point of Cooperation, without which living a successful and delightful live is difficult, also needs to be taught from the beginning. Cooperation a vital part of a good behavior leading one to many possibilities that cannot be otherwise accomplished. For instance, in a match of basketball, there a team of children playing against another team. If there is no cooperation within the members of one team how are they going to win the match. They need to accept and understand each other’s weakness and strength to integrate for victory hence this needs to be taught to some kids.

    To summarize, the feeling of competition is necessary for certain situations to be successful. Nonetheless being cooperative is imperative for so many times in life taking under consideration family, teamwork, sports or anywhere that requires more people working together on one goal. Thus both these fundamental aspects needs to be taught to children.

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    Ayesha

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    July 15, 2021 at 7:27 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (using computers)

    Usage of computers for hours and hours, that too from the initial years for growth, by the kids sounds like a health damaging scenario altogether. It will have consequences in plenty of ways in the lives of children. This essay will point out mainly to the disadvantages of using computers from early age and for long hours, mentioning the advantages as well.

    To begin with the advantages, children from the early age spending hours on computers will grasp information at a higher rate as they have developing minds, will get to learn time management besides being technologically more advanced. Though kids have sensitive minds they have an excellent power to attain what is being taught to them. Being very observant they imbibe things around them, getting any information and knowledge from computers due to spending hours will be advantageous. If the computer will consume so much of their hours, they will need to learn on how to bring balance between other aspects of life, how to complete the rest of the daily routine, how to socialize, play and do other activities. Hence doing all this as kids will make them more adaptive and mature.

    Undoubtedly, putting in long hours sitting and doing literally anything is harmful for the body let alone using computers during these hours. Kids would start to have health issues like neck pain, vision weakening, digestive problems, addiction, social anxiety, low immunity etc. They will not be able to enjoy the actual world and a normal life. It’ll make them stay away from the nature. Taking an example of a kid who spent more than 10 hours on computers daily, firstly for studying then for playing games and entertainment, had difficulties behaving normally in person, starting considering real life as in the game. He got addicted and required medical help.

    So in conclusion to all the above mentioned statements, though using computer in this modern world has benefit of its own but for kids to spends long hours from the very initial days of their lives will have more drastic effects than anything.

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    Ayesha

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    July 8, 2021 at 6:05 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Keeping pets is good)

    Many believe that keeping pet animals at home is beneficial for kids but there are certain people who don’t believe this considering it threatening and unhygienic for growing children. I agree with having pets, it has more pros than cons for kids, depending on the type of the pet and how the owner keeps them. This essay will cover on how keeping pets is good for children, also why it can be dangerous and unhealthy.

    In general, it is believed that keeping pets has many psychological benefits besides physical. For kids in particular, keeping pets in fact improves their immunity. In case of pets like dogs, kids are safe if the dog protects them. A trained dog knows who and what could be dangerous for kids. It can save them from kidnapers, someone who strikes on them, from other harmful animals too. Pets can make sure of the safety with the help of the sixed sense they have. For example, there was an incident where a kidnaper entered an unlocked house from the backyard, reached the kid playing in the hall, while the mother was in the bathroom oblivion of what was going on. Their dog, a German Shepard, managed to bite the kidnaper’s legs, make him incapacitated and save the kid.

    On the contrary, pet animals can also be vicious given the circumstances of extreme hunger, hot weather, diseased, threatened etc. They can be unhealthy too, if not properly groomed and maintained for a long time. Although all these situations can be averted by the owner itself and in order to do that taking proper care of the pet, feed them properly, in addition to keeping them vaccinated and taking certain other measures is proven to be effective. For example a pet that is never loved becomes aggressive gradually. A hungry cat may attack on people around it, a rabbit can bite on if felt threatened, even a baby horse’s kick can hit the kids really hard which sums up to be dangerous for kids.

    SO the conclusion comes out to be in agreement with keeping pets is beneficial for children, meanwhile what needs to be taken care of is what kind pets is around the kids and how the pet itself feels around the kids and the owner. It is recommended to adopt or buy a pet according to the needs and the ability to grow them as parents.

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    Ayesha

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    June 30, 2021 at 7:40 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -7 (Outdoor Activities)

    For the Overall growth of teenagers, playing outside is more conducive as compared with playing computer games. I completely agree to this statement. This essay will explain that outdoor activities are more beneficial than computer games for children’s growth and development.

    It’s evident that due to the advent of computers and conveniently accessible internet children are getting more and more compulsive. Some adults believe that playing games on computers deteriorates children’s growth in many aspects like health, psychology, behavioural etc. despite the fact that playing such games increases motor skills like hand and mind coordination though there re better substitutions. For example, they stay inside, sticking to one place in front of the computer for hours, oblivion to what is going on outside, what time it is, even what’s happening around, furthermore it affects the eyesight, the body cycle, brings stress, damages the body and so many adverse effects. So playing computer games is harmful.

    On the contrary, playing outside has more benefits. Children are able to learn, on their own level, by interacting with each other. If they are on the playground it increases their immunity in addition to making then physically fit. It beings them closer to nature.

    So to summarize, rather than sitting inside and playing computer games children should be motivated to play outside which will eventually be beneficial for long term.

  • Sports Events held on Global level are a fantastic chance for the sponsoring countries, to flaunt their ways of hospitality and the potential to host such a big event whereas a numerous people reckon that these events are just some irrational means of spending on extravaganza. This essay will try to explain both point to a reasonable extent.

    To begin with, in order to unite people and countries sports has always been a medium. Though it teaches brotherhood, it also inculcates competitiveness at the same time. Being it the biggest source of entertainment, countries find a great opportunity to invest for showcasing their capability and qualities in hosting events like Commonwealth Games, Olympics, The world Cup etc. For example, Since the era even before cinema, Scotland used to host competitive games, where many teams from neighbouring countries used to participate.

    Now, if international sports event needs to be organized, a great amount of capital needs to be invested for infrastructure, accomodating teams, managing spectators and the manpower to accomplish all these tasks. The time after this event is over, the purpose of the infrastructure, the employees comes to a hault, now is when the country needs strategies to not let these be neglected rather be utilised for more profit. As long as all this investment is paid off, organizing such a colossal event sounds rational. It also helps promote tourism in the country which again is beneficial for recuperating besides the sponsorships.

    In conclusion, if economically managed, global sports events would benefit the host country in so many ways that we can’t anticipate and if not It could lead to frenzy if all this investment goes in vain.

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    Ayesha

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    July 7, 2021 at 7:36 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Keeping pets is good)

    Many believe that keeping pet animals at home is beneficial for kids but there are certain people who don’t believe this considering it threatening and unhygienic for growing children. I agree with having pets, it has more pros than cons for kids, depending on the type of the pet and how the owner keeps them. This essay will cover on how keeping pets is good for children, also why it can be dangerous and unhealthy.

    In general, it is believed that keeping pets has many psychological benefits besides physical. For kids in particular, keeping pets in fact improves their immunity. In case of pets like dogs, kids are safe if the dog protects them. A trained dog knows who and what could be dangerous for kids. It can save them from kidnapers, someone who strikes on them, from other harmful animals too. Pets can make sure of the safety with the help of the sixed sense they have. For example, there was an incident where a kidnaper entered an unlocked house from the backyard, reached the kid playing in the hall, while the mother was in the bathroom oblivion of what was going on. Their dog, a German Shepard, managed to bite the kidnaper’s legs, make him incapacitated and save the kid.

    On the contrary, pet animals can also be vicious given the circumstances of extreme hunger, hot weather, diseased, threatened etc. They can be unhealthy too, if not properly groomed and maintained for a long time. Although all these situations can be averted by the owner itself and in order to do that taking proper care of the pet, feed them properly, in addition to keeping them vaccinated and taking certain other measures is proven to be effective. For example a pet that is never loved becomes aggressive gradually. A hungry cat may attack on people around it, a rabbit can bite on if felt threatened, even a baby horse’s kick can hit the kids really hard which sums up to be dangerous for kids.

    SO the conclusion comes out to be in agreement with keeping pets is beneficial for children, meanwhile what needs to be taken care of is what kind pets is around the kids and how the pet itself feels around the kids and the owner. It is recommended to adopt or buy a pet according to the needs and the ability to grow them as parents.

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