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    August 9, 2021 at 9:23 AM in reply to: ACADEMIC TASK 1: BAR CHART

    The bar chart provides information about how frequently people in the USA ate fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

    Overall, the the people in USA go to restaurants mostly once a week or once or twice a month. But people who go everyday and who never visits restaurants are less in USA. Moreover, people also visit fast food restaurants several times a week and few times a year.

    In 2003, people who visits everyday was about 4%, but visiting several times a week which upward by 17%. Then people who visit once a week is more by 33% where it’s the highest where people go to restaurants. Whereas, people who visit once or twice a month is about 30% which is second highest where people visit. Further, those who visit few times a year is 13% and also people who never go to fast food restaurants is less as compared is about 5%.

    In 2013, people who visits everyday was less compared to 2003, it was 3%. Then people who visit several times a week is 16% which is also less as compared to 2003. Then it was 23% where people visit once a week which makes second highest in 2013 category. Future more, people who go once or twice a month is the highest and is upto 33% which is more than 2003. Then people who visit few times a year was less by 15% and also people who never visit also was less as compared to 2003 which was 4%.

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    July 30, 2021 at 9:06 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (problem in many countries)

    Nowadays obesity is serious issue faced by many people living in rich countries. This essay I will be discussing about the main problems associated with the obesity and some solutions to avoid and recover from them.

    The main problems caused by obesity are overweight,risk of heart disease,high blood pressure. A growing number of obesity researcher shows that sitting long periods in one place,food and genetics, Which leads to overweight and obesity. This is because people sit in one place and do not move for hours and in addition they eat constantly. Moreover, a lot of studies have also named it as ‘sitting disease’ which often results overweight and backbone problems. For example, it is proven that 85% people working in cooperate companies are majorly suffering from obesity and backbone problems.

    In my opinion, the best solutions to this problem is by doing exercises and eating healthy food. Firstly, million of people tend to do physical activities in an easier manner which leads to obesity. Therefore, exercising is an effective was to make people more active, which make their body move frequently. Exercises include walking, jogging, and many more which helps the body recover form the obesity. Moreover, Eating outside foods increase the obesity and health issues. In addition, most of the people exercise daily but eat outside foods which effect their health. So by eating healthy foods everyday, which are home made and eating more vegetables, fruits and nuts helps the body to get more nutrition and healthy.

    In conclusion, leading a healthy life and taking care of ourselves is most important and refuse the risk of getting health problems, including obesity and backbone problems. The most effective solution is to exercise daily and eat healthy food.

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    July 25, 2021 at 7:18 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Feeling of competition)

    In today’s world, most of the people around the world lead a competitive life as to do best in everything.I completely agree that children should be encouraged in feeling of competition and cooperation.

    First of all, I believe that if their is competition among children,they want to work harder in school so that they can score better marks in examination than their classmates. Due to completion among children, they will highly to perform well in school as compared to others.For example,in quiz competition the children will try harder to solve or answer the questions so that they can be praised. That’s why it’s more important to have competition among children, so they can achieve better knowledge.

    Secondly,it is believed that children who know how to cooperate with others will attain success.In school , if the teachers teach them about the cooperation and team work the children will learn how to respect others opinions. It helps them to develop sharing more ideas . Hence, any mistakes can be avoided among the children which can achieve their dreams or goals in both studies and work.

    To conclude, I strongly believe that children should have the feeling of competition and cooperation to be successful in life .

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    July 15, 2021 at 7:31 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (using computers)

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