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    john

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    February 16, 2022 at 11:08 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -7 (Outdoor Activities)

    A lot of people think that outdoor activities are more useful for children’s development than playing computer games. I also strongly believe that children should be having a lot of outdoor activities rather than spending time in front of computers.

    We are becoming dependent on technology since the advent of computers. Computer has been accessible to every child, no matter at home or internet café. Instead of using it wisely, children have been utilizing it mainly for gaming rather than for studying purpose. During my childhood, computers were available only in computer labs and it was strictly for studies.

    Now children use computers only for gaming. Computer games may be responsible for children’s abysmal performance in school. Since children are more interested in games, they become complacent towards their health and also the ferocity of modern games can negatively impact the moral development of a child. There are a lot of real-life examples which justifies this. I remember reading a news where a child played PUBG game for more than 24 hours without any break and passed away. This child even forgot to have food, water which is so necessary for living. Computer games not only make a child lose attachment to the external world, but also creates a serious health issue.

    Physical and mental development in children between the age of 1 year to 14 year is rapid compared to other age group. Children minds are malleable only for so long. Outdoor activity gives a conducive environment for maintaining good health. It helps in overall development of a child. I believe that only outdoor activities and games will benefit our physical and mental health.

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    john

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    February 3, 2022 at 12:42 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -9 (Advertising)

    An advertisement might confuse a person, but it also helps most of people to choose right product based on the requirement. However, I believe Advertising will give an idea all the new products which will improve our lives.

    Most of the companies spend lot on marketing their products, wherein one modern way of doing so is through advertising. Since everyone now in this world is connected with media by television, mobile phones etc, advertising is the best way to do reach the customers. Celebrities are been hired as the ambassadors for the products and they promote or project the products via advertisement.

    Most of them say, celebrities are meticulously chosen to entice the people. I feel this statement is deceptive. In contrast people just don’t procure things looking at advertisement. It is just to provide awareness to masses about a new product. Indeed, people always look for the specification and also value for money. In fact, no one is ready to spend off-limits.

    It is all about how people will understand and evaluate things. Any advertisement doesn’t force people to buy things. But it will reach and every person across the world, which will help them get new products as per their requirement and which in-turn improve their lives.

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