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    Gnanaprakash

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    June 30, 2021 at 9:34 PM in reply to: Academic writing part 1 Ipshita 8pm 1

    This essay illustrates about the amount of fuel spent by the three classes namely the poor, middle-income and richest of the society in comparison with their income percentage.

    In the United Kingdom, the trend looks like the poor consume less fuel burning about 0.5% of their income. Whereas the in the United states the rich use less fuel spending about 3.5% of their respective incomes. Also the highest amount of fuel is spent by both the poor and middle-income in the United Kingdom and in the United States it is the poor who consume more fuel about 4% of their income.

    Overall, In the United kingdom the percent of income spent by the middle-income and the richest ranges from 2.5 to 3.5. Anyway both the United Kingdom and United states middle-income and rich class spend about 3.5% of their income on fuel at a point of time.

    In Conclusion, the United kingdom followed an upward trend and the United States the downward trend in fuel consumption with respect to their social class.

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    Gnanaprakash

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    June 29, 2021 at 8:56 PM in reply to: Academic / General part 2 Ipshita 8pm 1

    Education is important for kids to build and train their cognitive skills to make them face the real world. Now, A lot of countries have different opinions about what could be the right age for their kids to start schooling. Some argue it is better to send them as early as four years old and some on contrary decide to hold them until they reach seven or eight years of age. This essay will discuss about these two topics and highlights why the former opinion is a better pick.

    In my perception when parents plan to send their kids a little late along their age, their motive here could be any of the two reasons.
    1)They want to restrict them at home with private tutors or
    2)Their kids are not yet simply ready for the School.
    The former could be because they are not satisfied with the current education system and want to tailor their children’s education according to their conduct. The latter simply being the blind love for one’s children, worried about the heavy burden schools put up on students these days.

    I strongly suggest kids are to be sent to school at the right age which could be around three to four years of age. While the points discussed in the above paragraph is not completely wrong it does have a few drawbacks. For instance, I started my formal education at an early age where I got to learn a lot of things like conversing with strangers, table manners, making friends and a lot of predominant things which cannot be taught at private tuition and holding up the kids education for very long time is a foolish choice.

    In Conclusion, Parents love for their children should not cloud their judgement, There’s a time for everything and not keeping up with the norms might put their kid’s future at risk.

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    June 23, 2021 at 9:29 PM in reply to: Academic / General part 2 Ipshita 8pm

    Teenage is the sweet spot where you get a chance to explore and experiment. From generations the pressure curve for the teenagers kept rising for various reasons and doesn’t seem to settle anytime sooner. This essay will discuss mental health and stress issues in comparison with current and previous generation teenagers.

    Starting from tasks, teenagers these days get their feet wet in a variety of extracurricular activities which leaves them having very less time and end up having a busy schedule. While not everyone has a dedicated schedule, few kids find themselves taking in a lot of physical and mental pressure to reach their deadlines unlike the previous generation. The exposure and opportunities to the outer world is immense in comparison.

    Factors like fear, peer pressure and expectations plays a key role in one’s life. For example, growing up my grades where constantly put out to compare with cousins and neighbors which took a heavy toll on my mental health. While a awful lot of kids don’t get a chance to pick their choice of study, education stood to be a major contribution for rising stress levels. While a decade ago, as most of the teenagers calmly moved on with their lives with whatever life put in their way they were a little less prone to stress and mental issues.

    In Conclusion, as the life cycle is evolving and changing rapidly with new inventions and rapid breakthroughs happening all over, teenagers involve themselves doing a lot in very less time. Proper management of time and opening up and talking about the issues should solve this problem.

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    June 17, 2021 at 9:33 PM in reply to: Academic writing 8pm Ipshita

    The table illustrates the surveys recorded about McGill University in the year 2005, 2010 and 2015 respectively.

    The ratings for the student services kept outperforming the previous recorded year constantly standing at 78 in 2015, While the range of modules offered couldn’t keep up it saw a decline in ratings which fell from 39 in 2005 to 25 in 2015.

    Though the ratings for Teaching quality came down to 72 in 2010 it bounced back and recorded 78 in 2015. As the library resources is trying to keep up the pace it still witnessed a minute downfall in 2015 and of all the aspects Sports and social facilities remains unchanged in all the 3 years sticking to 65 good ratings.

    In Conclusion, For three years the ratings for Range of modules offered kept sinking, Student services has plunged and sports and social facilities remained unchanged.

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    Gnanaprakash

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    June 11, 2021 at 12:22 AM in reply to: IELTS Academic Task – 1 – Diagram- 1

    The picture portrays two events involved in the production of electricity with

    the help of wave power. The first one including when the waves arrive and the latter

    when they withdraw.

    Initially, when the waves collide with the cliff they enter through a chamber with

    full force bringing along a huge amount of air which dictates the direction of the wave

    flow. As they hit the sea wall they come to a stop and the air that has carried them

    moves forward and travels along with the thin columns all the way up to the turbine rotating

    it in the clockwise direction. This will help pump electricity and the wind exits through

    these columns

    Secondly, when the air moves in the opposite direction (away from the cliff in this

    event), the air enters into the narrow column where it has exited previously. Then it

    turns the turbine and exits through the chamber along with the waves. The turbine is

    in fact spun in the same direction in both the events.

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    Gnanaprakash

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    June 7, 2021 at 9:52 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 4 (Crimes)

    Crime is a sin committed by people to urge their inner desires, sometimes to stop the burning urge in order to bring them solace. However it is until it is committed, most of the people are not aware of its repercussions. Criminals are put behind the bars to contain their ongoing rage and make them pay for their crimes. This is still a perpetual debate as to how much of an impact it is on them.

    After sentencing, the guilty is taken to prison to serve their sentence. It is not so surprising fact that there are more prisons in USA in comparison with the number of Universities . Now, has the crime rate decreased ? Well, The mass shootings in schools and churches, racial abuse and homophobia wouldn’t agree. This will answer the question “Is longer prison sentences the solution for putting crime under control?” This will only make their pain worse or make their life worthless after wasting their peak of age counting in prison. Not to mention Once they are out, time is a luxury they cannot afford anymore.


    In retrospect, as longer sentences are not reaching the expectations of reducing crime rates, it is time to explore few alternatives put them under control. Now, Starting with the roots, Education. Educating students constantly to better handle their emotions and make them aware of their legal rights. Not only restricting to students, but also including the adults in this process, though using different methods like starting an awareness program, including immediate help and reminding to be kind to one another. As most of the ugly crimes are committed due to emotional trauma, everyone must be encouraged to visit the psychiatrist to deal with them and curb their emotions when necessary.

    In conclusion, the rules and systems needs to evolve as to keep up with the ongoing tragedies and devise a proper plan to overcome them. As the traditional methods are not coming to the rescue, change is necessary.

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