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    Sohail Madan

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    February 17, 2023 at 12:21 AM in reply to: Essay on Crime

    Violent activities are being effortlessly managed in recent times. A part of community does agree to this, however, others feel there’s still lot of scope for improvement in this area.

    In different parts of world, we could find varying crime rate. In developed countries, we have flawless laws, swift actions that makes them offence free. Nonetheless, in developing countries, where systems are not yet stable; we see more number of offence happening. Moreover, type of crime may also change based on geolocation. Such as, places with access to internat get plethora of cyber misdeed cases everyday, on the other hand remote areas suffer from theft instances.

    Running awareness campaigns in the society can help reducing the malicious practices to a great extent. We can educate people to be cautious about certain things like while using internet or travelling after dawn. More importantly, we can spread awareness among the lawbreakers that they could get punished in a ways that could alter their entire life. May be, authorities can set some examples by penalising the accused with serious charges, so wave terror spreads among other offenders as well.

    At the end of the day, i must say inhuman acts have taken a dip, lately. In spite of that we need to complete certain action items that are pending on our plate. It’s not just government who should be responsible for eradicating the evil from the society, we all are in this together. We should all vow that neither we will indulge ourselves nor we will allow anyone to encourage wrongdoings.

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    Sohail Madan

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    February 1, 2023 at 8:58 AM in reply to: IELTS ESSAY ON HOUSING PROBLEMS

    Some people commit that increasing government’s focus on reducing environmental and housing problems will lead to prevention of illness and disease. I do agree to this statement to great extent. However, i believe that not all of the health issues are avoidable, genetically transformed deformities could be one example.

    In the past, it has been seen that officials did try to improve environment health, but it failed drastically. One reason for this could be lower degree of focus. In my opinion government should bring in the laws that involve strict actions on members of society who tend to pollute the environment or ignite the housing issues. Post achieving the target, food, air wouldn’t be contaminated, which are major source of illness and disease. Moreover, with proper residents people could prevent themselves from scorching heat or icy cold weather.

    A study demonstrates, a person whose ancestors had diabetes are more likely to catch it than anyone else. Furthermore, lower physical activities and inappropriate choice of food results in more diseases than pollution or housing problems. We can’t just rely on officials, we need to protect ourselves as well by making the right choices about what we consume and what we do.

    To conclude, I would say improved environment and reduced housing problems would definitely prevent illness and diseases. However we still have some of deformities that are hard to prevent but by taking care of ourselves we can dramatically reduce the chances of it occurring.

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    Sohail Madan

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    January 31, 2023 at 12:49 AM in reply to: Writing Task 2

    With emerging technology, news has become easily accessible to everyone over internet and newspapers are no longer considered as it’s primary source. With no second thought in my mind, i completely agree with this statement and why wouldn’t i, after all it’s an advancement in this sector, furthermore it comes with lots of perks.

    Key benefits of catching up with news online include consuming it whenever and wherever you want, with the click of a button. One can quickly search the keywords and hop from one page to another with a slightest of scroll. Moreover it gives out of the box capability to mark the news as important and read it some other time. These all smallest of the things makes it convenient for the readers and specially the one’s who are preparing for entrance exams.

    Delightful experience comes with the features news apps have started to roll out recently which include giving the user ability to grab the news in multiple languages. In addition to this, people can now tune in to audio version of the newspaper. Imagine how beneficial it is turning out to be for enthusiastic people who don’t know how to read, however are very keen to keep themselves updated.

    To conclude, i can say without any doubt newspaper has lost it’s importance but for good only. Adapting to the technology is crucial in modern era and style of consumption of the news is no different. With time we might get to see the features, which are hard to imagine now and believe me they are all going to benefit people in one way or the other.

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