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    Soumya

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    March 14, 2024 at 11:24 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay on Children Farming

    Many discussions revolve around the contention to include vegetable farming and animal care as a part of education for young students. This essay will evaluate the positive and negative view points of teaching children about growing vegetables and animal handling.

    Animals and plants are a part of our life; therefore, it is important to learn how to take care of both. It is a type of life’s essential skills. Nowadays, vegetables available in market is sprayed with harmful chemicals to preserve them for longer period of time. In this situation, it is better for us to know about growing vegetables in our kitchen garden itself. Therefore, I believe that it is a great idea to train school children about gardening so that they can take forward this knowledge for lifelong. Pets are an essential part of our psychological toolkit and a great source of comfort. Pets may also decrease stress, improve heart health, and even help children with their emotional and social skills. So, to make animals as a part of our life, it is important to learn about their handling and care at young age.

    Despite of above benefits, one major drawback of teaching kids about taking care of plants and animals can be a health risk. There are increased chances of children to get infected by mishandling of plant fertilizers. Even they can get hurt by animal bite. Because of these worries, many parents do not encourage gardening and cattle farming at school. Practically, there are some other difficulties at school such as availability of space and resources for planting and pet care.

    In conclusion, training about growing vegetables and taking care of animals at young age is beneficial despite of few arguments regarding health risks. In my views, advantages are more and it will definitely outweigh the disadvantages.

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    Soumya

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    March 1, 2024 at 10:50 AM in reply to: Advantages/Disadvantages Essay

    Nowadays, technology has taken over most of the works done by humans. Although it is reducing the job opportunities for people, advantages are uncountable.

    Everyone will encourage introduction of machineries into the world, because all of us are benefited from advanced technologies and developments.

    This essay will discuss about positive and negative aspects of this trend.

    In this scientific era, new machines are getting invented day by day to improve human life and these are popularized easily through social medias. There are many items that help us to finish house hold works in a short period of time. Especially it is a great support for working professionals.

    Most of the industries are promoting the use of machines that are capable of doing the work with great accuracy and lesser time than humans and they are succeeded in achieving goals. There are machines which can do work as much as that of 100 people and it is more profitable for companies. Recently Artificial intelligence is invented and it has a great future. For sure, it is going to conquer almost all aspects of human life.

    One of the major drawbacks is unemployment. Already people are struggling to get job as there are less requirement of manpower due to advanced technologies and artificial intelligence tools.

    Another downside is reduction of confidence and creativity. Despite of spending time to find solutions by their own thinking, most of them has started using AI tools in every situation. Eventually this will increase dependency and decline human intelligence.

    In my opinion, technology inventions are important, but people have to take extra efforts to cope-up with current situation.

    In conclusion, technology upgradation is a part of development and we have to focus on how to utilize them effectively rather than looking into the drawbacks.

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    Soumya

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    February 14, 2024 at 9:59 AM in reply to: IELTS ESSAY on learning a language

    Many people think that languages are not necessary to learn in the beginning period of schooling and can be studied upon later stages. In my opinion, languages are equally important to be learnt in the very beginning stage of student life.

    Communication skills are very important in every stage of our life. Many people are not able to communicate properly as they are not proficient in their languages. As children can learn quickly than adults, it is better to teach them all important languages along with other subjects. Students will enjoy learning new languages and they can catch up it effortlessly. The basics that we learn in childhood will be deep rooted and it will definitely help us to shape our career in an effective way. Many students are struggling to learn languages later as they have not studied it properly in the beginning.

    However, many people have a concern that language learning would be a burden for their children, if there are several subjects. They believe that languages can be taught later, instead main focus should be on other mandatory subjects. They are not realising the importance of languages. In rural area, people restrain their children from learning second languages as they are more into their native languages. They usually connect languages with their culture. They often think that speaking in foreign language will gradually change their children’s attitude and culture.

    All in all, my opinion is to teach languages as early as possible. I believe that language is a barrier for effective communication and it should be trained well, as other subjects during initial stages of our schooling.

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