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    Swarnim

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    March 15, 2022 at 11:29 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -7 (Outdoor Activities)

    In modern days, with the advent of computers, activities for children is mainly considered as gaming consoles, watching television and using other sorts of entertainment devices and a lot of other toddlers are stuck with there parent’s mobile phones and the parents are also condoning it as they are busy with there busy schedule. But I believe there should be a limit on these kind of entertainment resources and parent should encourage there children to play outside and teach them how to socialize with other kids.

    Firstly, this will help them to grow not only at physical aspects but also there mental abilities will get stronger. Children who do not have physical activities are extremely susceptible to obesity and playing a lot of computer games make them ferocious.

    Furthermore, going outdoor everyday will provide them conducive circumstances which will gradually increase there socializing habits to improve the coordination which is a key to grow confidence and the performance in the school , college and likewise it will help them to build team spirit. Another important skill they will get is better decision making which will reduce there impulsive behavior.

    To conclude, my opinion is to limit children’s indoor activities and should be motivated to participate in as much as outdoor activities so that they can turn down there complacent behavior and boost there character to become a better person in life.

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    Swarnim

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    February 16, 2022 at 11:03 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -7 (Outdoor Activities)

    In modern days, with the advent of computers, activities for children is mainly considered as gaming consoles, watching television and using other sorts of entertainment devices and a lot of other toddlers are stuck with there parent’s mobile phones and the parents are also condoning it as they are busy with there busy schedule. But I believe there should be a limit on these kind of entertainment resources and parent should encourage there children to play outside and teach them how to socialize with other kids.

    Firstly, this will help them to grow not only at physical aspects but also there mental abilities will get stronger. Children who do not have physical activities are extremely susceptible to obesity and playing a lot of computer games make them ferocious.

    Furthermore, going outdoor everyday will provide them conducive circumstances which will gradually increase there socializing habits to improve the coordination which is a key to grow confidence and the performance in the school , college and likewise it will help them to build team spirit. Another important skill they will get is better decision making which will reduce there impulsive behavior.

    To conclude, my opinion is to limit children’s indoor activities and should be motivated to participate in as much as outdoor activities so that they can turn down there complacent behavior and boost there character to become a better person in life.

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    Swarnim

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    February 2, 2022 at 10:07 AM in reply to: Task 1 (letter writing) : apologize for absence (semi-formal)

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    Hi Sir,

    Please accept my sincere apologies for my absence from the event held yesterday as I have to be available in another equally necessary event.

    I am extremely sorry for not being able to attend this crucial event because I have to be there in another event held for the advancement of the technology on which we are currently working in our project. Since it is the educational event and knowledge gathered from here can be used for the good on our project so I though it will be a better headway to utilize my time in this event.

    I still can be able to get information about the missed event as I told a team member to record a thorough video so that I can watch it later also I’ll get in touch with the people who attend the event to get the essential elements I missed here.

    At the end, kindly forgive me for the same, I ‘ll try not to clash the events in future as I’ll work on to plan them more accurately.

    Your faithful

    Sawrnim Dixit

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    Swarnim

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    January 24, 2022 at 9:41 AM in reply to: Task 1 (letter writing) : Invitation letter to friend

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    Dear friend,

    Hi, Hope you’re well. I am pleased to inform you that we have relocated to a new apartment.

    We recently moved here as we were facing a lot of issue in our old apartment like the old construction has started to fall on our heads, every day there seems to be a different problem and most difficult times was when we were infected with novel corona virus. Less number of room made it even problematic.

    Our new house is located at the outskirt of the city. The ambience here is really soothing and full of positivity, the air is cool and less polluted with a mesmerizing view of farm lands from our balcony , a glance of this exquisite view at the time of the dawn can make your day full of positive energy.

    Your are cordially invited to visit our house, we will have lunch together on upcoming weekend. We will be very happy if you and your family will join us.


    Your affectionately.

    Swarnim Dixit

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