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  • Events are important however some people spend lot of money on celebration of such events. In my opinion people are spending more money on these events than required.

    Undoubtedly people are spending too much money on these events, Especially evets like: wedding & birthdays. Events are important even id it is of small cause or as important as wedding but spending too much money is unjustifiable. People can curb their spending and can use the money in a better way. For example, they can save the money for future use or can spent on social cause.

    People are spending too much money to showcase their status and also try to please target audience with their lavish celebration. It also increases unconscious competition in celebrating such events. If i want to celebrate an event, i will spend the money as per my budget and try to save some money for any add-hoc event in future. There are instances when people spent more than they are capable of and as a result they are in huge debt before even they realize. As mentioned earlier that events are important but spending too much money will never going to increase the importance of event, even a small celebration is enough.

    In conclusion, Spending too much money on events is illogical and people should spend as per their budget. There are lot of ways to celebrate an event and spending too much money is not the only way.

    • Events are important however some people spend lot of money on celebration of such events. In my opinion people are spending more money on these events than required.

      Undoubtedly people are spending too much money on these events, Especially evets like: wedding & birthdays. Events are important even if it is for small cause or as important as wedding but spending too much money is unjustifiable. People can curb their spending and can use the money in a better way. For example, they can save the money for future use or can spend on social cause.

      People are spending too much money to showcase their status and also try to please target audience with their lavish celebration. It also increases unconscious competition in celebrating such events. If I want to celebrate an event, I will spend the money as per my budget and try to save some money for any add-hoc event in future. There are instances when people spent more than they are capable of and as a result they are in huge debt before even they realize. As mentioned earlier that events are important but spending too much money will never going to increase the importance of event, even a small celebration is enough.

      In conclusion, Spending too much money on events is illogical and people should spend as per their budget. There are lot of ways to celebrate an event and spending too much money is not the only way.

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    vivek

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    July 16, 2021 at 11:50 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (using computers)

    In today’s world it is near to impossible to keep children’s away from computers.

    It’s better to start using computers from early age especially in this digital world. It give them immense opportunity to explore the world by their own unique thoughts. Moreover, it will enhance their logical & analytical skills which are essential in this competitive environment. There are lot of educational games which will keep them engage in study for longer time. Hence, they will learn lot of new things in a fun or enjoyable way.

    On the other hand there are lot of disadvantages as well. In my opinion, Primary disadvantage is physical growth of the child. Humans are said to be social animals, they like to interact physically rather than virtually. Spending long hours on computer may hamper the social interaction (physical aspect). In other words, it will put a negative impact on social/public behavior of the children. Children’s may find objectionable contents over the internet if not supervised properly.

    Every cloud has a silver lining and interacting with computers is no exception.

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    vivek

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    July 6, 2021 at 11:19 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -7 (Outdoor Activities)

    I agree that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. There are lot of development in computer games but it’s always better to participate in outdoor activities rather than stick to computer screen.

    In the current era of technology, everyone is surrounded by electronic devices. Undoubtedly these devices are easily accessible. We cannot keep these devices away from children’s reach but we should encourage our children’s to participate in outdoor activities. Outdoor activities will provide many benefits over computer games. For example, they may get much needed vitamin D, it may enhance their behavioral skills. Outdoor activities are essential for overall development of the children’s growth.

    We have seen vary adverse effect on health because of addiction to computer games. There is some news related to child committing suicide to reach the next level of the game. Parent should keep their children away from such kind of addiction. There are many unethical games over the internet which will affect the behavior of the children. There are reports saying children’s those who addicted to computer games are more aggressive than others.

    It’s our responsibility as a society to educate our future generation with the benefits of outdoor activities. Again, I agree that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games.

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