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IELTS Task 1: Influencers Bar Chart
The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2011 and 2021.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart details the number of followers for famous personalities in Instagram in years 2018 and 2021.
Overall, data is captured from the accounts of Cristiano Ronaldo, The Rock, Ariana Grande, Kylie Jenner and Selena Gomez and it is observed that Cristiano had the greatest number of followers while Selena Gomez was less popular among all in 2021.
In 2018, number of the fans for Selena Gomez was approximately 125 million whereas Cristiano had just 100 million plus. However, this figure increased precipitously for Cristiano, tripling the numbers in 2021 while Selena’s admirers doubled. Though Selena was having the highest number of supporters in 2018, she was unable to keep the top position in 2021 as the figures dropped to the last position among the 5 influencers.
Furthermore, supporters of The Rock, kylie and Ariana were 100 million in 2018 but numerals shows that their fan base doubled in 3 years reaching 250 million out numbering Selena’s followers. Finally, it is observed that there is no huge difference in figures between the three in 2021, but numbers of The Rock’s admirers are slightly more than the other two influencers.
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The bar chart details the number of followers for famous personalities in Instagram in the years 2018 and 2021.
Overall, data was captured from the accounts of Cristiano Ronaldo, The Rock, Ariana Grande, Kylie Jenner and Selena Gomez and it is observed that Cristiano had the greatest number of followers, while Selena Gomez was the least popular among all in 2021.
In 2018, the number of fans for Selena Gomez was approximately 125 million, whereas Cristiano had just 100 million plus. However, this figure increased precipitously for Cristiano, tripling the numbers in 2021 while Selena’s admirers doubled. Though Selena was having the highest number of supporters in 2018, she was unable to keep the top position in 2021 as the figures dropped to the last position among the 5 influencers.
Furthermore, supporters of The Rock, Kylie, and Ariana were 100 million in 2018 but numerals show that their fan base doubled in 3 years, reaching 250 million, outnumbering Selena’s followers. Finally, it is observed that there is no huge difference in figures between the three in 2021, but the number of he Rock’s admirers was slightly more than the other two influencers.
– Few grammatical errors.
-Try to write your graph in past when dates are given.
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The bar graph depicts the popularity of celebrities by showing the number of influencers in millions in the year 2018 and 2021.
Overall, the number of Instagram followers were around 100 millions for all the popular personalities and sharply increased for each one in the year 2021.
In 2018, Selena Gomez had the highest number of followers with a total of approximately 125 millions. On the other hand, The Rock and Kylie Jenner had the lowest number that is nearly 90 million followers. Cristiano Ronaldo and Ariana Grande had almost same number of followers in 2018 that is about 110 million.
The number of followers in 2021 had increased tremendously for Cristiano Ronaldo with the highest of approximately 310 millions followers. The lowest in the trend was Selena Gomez with almost 240 million followers. All the other influencers show the same digit that is 250 million.
The bar graph clearly shows that each celebrities popularity had increased at a very high pace since 2018 that they have touched or are near 250 million in 2021 and the exception over here is Criastiano Ronaldo whose popularity had beaten all records and gone above 300 million followers on Instagram.
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The bar graph depicts the popularity of celebrities by showing the number of influencers in millions in the years 2018 and 2021.
Overall, the number of Instagram followers was around 100 million for all the popular personalities and sharply increased for each one in the year 2021.
In 2018, Selena Gomez had the highest number of followers with a total of approximately 125 million. On the other hand, The Rock and Kylie Jenner had the lowest numbers, which is nearly 90 million followers. Cristiano Ronaldo and Ariana Grande had almost the same number of followers in 2018. That is about 110 million.
The number of followers in 2021 had increased tremendously for Cristiano Ronaldo with the highest of approximately 310 millions followers. The lowest in the trend was Selena Gomez, with almost 240 million followers. All the other influencers show the same digit, that is 250 million.
The bar graph clearly shows that each celebrity’s popularity had increased at a very high pace since 2018; they have touched or are near 250 million in 2021; the exception here is Criastiano Ronaldo whose popularity had beaten all records and gone above 300 million followers on Instagram.
– Few grammatical errors.
-Try to write your graph in past when dates are given.
-Use cohesive devices.
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The given bar chart explains the popularity of influential figures on Instagram between 2081 and 2021.
Here, we can see the bar chart is consist of four renowned celebrities such as Cristiano Ronaldo, The Rock, Ariana Grande, Kylie Jenner and Selena Gomez. From the bar chart we can see, in 2018, Selena Gomez had the highest number of followers with a total of approximately 125 million while The Rock had the lowest number of fans with roughly 90 million. Cristiano Ronaldo, Ariana Grande and Kylie Jenner had followers around 100 million.
However, in 2018 Cristiano Ronaldo has got the highest number of fans with more than 300 million while Selena Gomes scored the lowest number of followers with a number of 240 million approximately. Other figures like The Rock, Ariana Grande and Kylie Gomez got have also got a good hike in terms of followers as they also have around 250 million followers on Instagram.
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The bar chart illustrates the popularity of celebrities in the years 2018 and 2021 on Instagram.
Overall, the number of Instagram followers were around 100 -150 million for all the celebrities in the year 2018 and there has been a rapid increase in the number of followers over the years.
In 2018, the popularity of the personalities was less than the year 2021 on their Instagram account. There were about 100 million followers for both Cristiano Ronaldo and Ariana Grande. The Rock along with Kylie Jenner had approximately same number of followers that is around 90 million. Moreover, Selena Gomez had nearly 125 million followers, highest among the given personalities.
There is an evident increase in number of followers in the year 2021, Cristano Ronaldo being the most popular celebrity with 310 million. On the other hand, The Rock, Ariana Grande and Kylie Jenner have almost 250 million followers. Besides, Selena Gomez has fewer admirers amongst them, nearly 250 million on Instagram.
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The bar chart provides information about popularity of well-known instagram accounts in millions between 2018 and 2021
Overall, number of followers for all these accounts nearly tripled during the course of 2018 to 2021. None of the accounts showed a downward trend.
During 2018, Selena Gomez had much more than a 100 million followers which was the highest of the 5 influencers discussed. However, Christiano Ronaldo and Ariana Grande had almost equal number, just above a 100 million followers. Then, The Rock and Kylie Jenner had just below a 100 million followers which was comparably lowest of the 5 influencers.
In the year 2021, Christiano Ronaldo was the most popular influencer with way more than 300 million fans. Moreover, The Rock, Ariana Grande and Kylie Jenner had almost equal followers of 250 million. Although, Selena Gomez had approximately less number of followers of just less than 250 followers among the 5 influencers it is still almost thrice as that of 2018.
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The bar chart provides information about the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in millions between 2018 and 2021.
Overall, the number of followers for all these accounts nearly tripled during the course of 2018 to 2021.
BP1 – In 2018, Selena Gomez had by far the most followers at 125 million, more than Ariana Grande (112 million) and Ronaldo (110 million). On the other hand, Kylie’s followers were just under 100 million in 2018, and The Rock’s were slightly lower at around 95 million.
BP2 – By 2021, Selena’s follower count had nearly doubled to 245 million, while Ronaldo’s surged to lead all celebrities at 315 million and Ariana Grande increased more than twofold to 251 million.
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The vertical bar graph represents a range of followers of admired Instagram influencers during 2018 and 2021. Units are measured in millions.
Overall, Cristiano Ronaldo has the highest number of followers amongst the other influencers. Although, in 2021, there is a sudden increment in the number of followers as compared to 2018.
In 2018, Selena Gomez has the most number of believers approximately 150, whereas The Rock and Kylie Jenner have followers just below 100. However, Ariana Grande and Selena Gomez set forth their fan following over a 100 million.
Furthermore, in 2021, there is a dramatic surge by three times of that in 2018. While, Kylie Jenner and Selena Gomez increased their fan following equal to or just under 250 million. Whereas, The Rock and Ariana Grande were able take it upto 250 million and above. However, Cristiano Ronaldo appears to be have an outrageous amount of believers about more than 300 million.
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In 2018, Selena Gomez has the most believers, approximately 150, whereas The Rock and Kylie Jenner have followers just below 100. Ariana Grande and Selena Gomez, on the other hand, have fan bases of over 100 million.
Furthermore, there was a threefold increase in the number of admirers in 2021 compared to 2018. While Kylie Jenner and Selena Gomez grew their fan bases to around or slightly less than 250 million, The Rock and Ariana Grande were able to take it up to $250 million and above. However, Cristiano Ronaldo appeared to have an outrageous amount of believers about more than 300 million.
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The bar graph gives information about the popularity of celebrities’ Instagram accounts in the year 2018 and 2021. Overall, it can be seen that there was an upward trend in 2021 compared to 2018. Christiano Ronaldo becoming the most followed and Selena Gomez going from most to least popular over the period of time.
In 2018, Selena Gomez had the most followers around 125 million, more than Cristiano Ronaldo because he influenced only 110 million users. This situation was exactly opposite in 2021, Ronaldo was followed by 320 million people. Although Selena Gomez’s fan base increased to 245 million, she had less followers than other Famous persons.
The final three influencers, Kylie Jenner, Ariana Grande and The Rock, experienced similarly dramatic rising trends. Ariana’s followers were just around 110 million in 2018, and The Rock and Kaylie Jenner were slightly lower than 100 million. All the celebrities added approximately 150 million followers with the former finishing around 250 million.
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The following bar chart dives into the details of few major influencers and their following on social media platform Instagram in year’s 2018 and 2021.
In summary, Cristiano Ronaldo has seen the sharpest increase in following by the year 2021 as compared to other influencers which have also seen a sharp increase in following since 2018.
In 2018, Selena Gomez had the greatest number of followers being at 125 million approx. whereas Kylie Jenner and The Rock had their following count hovering around just below 100 million in comparison to the follower count of Ariana Grande and Cristiano Ronaldo which was recorded slightly above 100 million users.
Furthermore in 2021, Every influencer has seen a multiple fold increase in follower count with Cristiano Ronaldo’s following increasing most by 3X to more than 300 million followers. Other influencers like Ariana Grande, Kylie Jenner and The Rock have also seen similar drastic increase in following to 250 million followers more or less although Selena Gomez has seen least dramatic increase at about 2X increase to 250 million followers from 125 million in 2018.
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The following bar chart dives into the details of few major influencers and their following on social media platform, Instagram in year’s 2018 and 2021.
In summary, Cristiano Ronaldo has seen the sharpest increase in followers by the year 2021 as compared to other influencers who have also seen a sharp increase in following since 2018.
In 2018, Selena Gomez had the greatest number of followers being at 125 million approx. whereas Kylie Jenner and The Rock had their following count hovering around just below 100 million in comparison to the follower count of Ariana Grande and Cristiano Ronaldo which was recorded slightly above 100 million users.
Furthermore, in 2021, every influencer has seen a multiple-fold increase in follower count with Cristiano Ronaldo’s following increasing most by 3X to more than 300 million followers. Other influencers like Ariana Grande, Kylie Jenner and The Rock have also seen a similar drastic increase in followers to 250 million followers more or less although Selena Gomez has seen the least dramatic increase at about 2X increase to 250 million followers from 125 million in 2018.– Be careful about grammatical errors.
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