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  • sheena

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    June 11, 2022 at 11:57 AM
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    The bar chart details the number of followers for famous personalities in Instagram in years 2018 and 2021.

    Overall, data is captured from the accounts of Cristiano Ronaldo, The Rock, Ariana Grande, Kylie Jenner and Selena Gomez and it is observed that Cristiano had the greatest number of followers while Selena Gomez was less popular among all in 2021.

    In 2018, number of the fans for Selena Gomez was approximately 125 million whereas Cristiano had just 100 million plus. However, this figure increased precipitously for Cristiano, tripling the numbers in 2021 while Selena’s admirers doubled. Though Selena was having the highest number of supporters in 2018, she was unable to keep the top position in 2021 as the figures dropped to the last position among the 5 influencers.

    Furthermore, supporters of The Rock, kylie and Ariana were 100 million in 2018 but numerals shows that their fan base doubled in 3 years reaching 250 million out numbering Selena’s followers. Finally, it is observed that there is no huge difference in figures between the three in 2021, but numbers of The Rock’s admirers are slightly more than the other two influencers.

    • isha

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      June 14, 2022 at 4:27 PM
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      The bar chart details the number of followers for famous personalities in Instagram in the years 2018 and 2021.

      Overall, data was captured from the accounts of Cristiano Ronaldo, The Rock, Ariana Grande, Kylie Jenner and Selena Gomez and it is observed that Cristiano had the greatest number of followers, while Selena Gomez was the least popular among all in 2021.

      In 2018, the number of fans for Selena Gomez was approximately 125 million, whereas Cristiano had just 100 million plus. However, this figure increased precipitously for Cristiano, tripling the numbers in 2021 while Selena’s admirers doubled. Though Selena was having the highest number of supporters in 2018, she was unable to keep the top position in 2021 as the figures dropped to the last position among the 5 influencers.

      Furthermore, supporters of The Rock, Kylie, and Ariana were 100 million in 2018 but numerals show that their fan base doubled in 3 years, reaching 250 million, outnumbering Selena’s followers. Finally, it is observed that there is no huge difference in figures between the three in 2021, but the number of he Rock’s admirers was slightly more than the other two influencers.

      – Few grammatical errors.

      -Try to write your graph in past when dates are given.

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  • Nikita

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    June 12, 2022 at 5:12 PM
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    The bar graph depicts the popularity of celebrities by showing the number of influencers in millions in the year 2018 and 2021.

    Overall, the number of Instagram followers were around 100 millions for all the popular personalities and sharply increased for each one in the year 2021.

    In 2018, Selena Gomez had the highest number of followers with a total of approximately 125 millions. On the other hand, The Rock and Kylie Jenner had the lowest number that is nearly 90 million followers. Cristiano Ronaldo and Ariana Grande had almost same number of followers in 2018 that is about 110 million.

    The number of followers in 2021 had increased tremendously for Cristiano Ronaldo with the highest of approximately 310 millions followers. The lowest in the trend was Selena Gomez with almost 240 million followers. All the other influencers show the same digit that is 250 million.

    The bar graph clearly shows that each celebrities popularity had increased at a very high pace since 2018 that they have touched or are near 250 million in 2021 and the exception over here is Criastiano Ronaldo whose popularity had beaten all records and gone above 300 million followers on Instagram.

    • isha

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      June 14, 2022 at 4:32 PM
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      The bar graph depicts the popularity of celebrities by showing the number of influencers in millions in the years 2018 and 2021.

      Overall, the number of Instagram followers was around 100 million for all the popular personalities and sharply increased for each one in the year 2021.

      In 2018, Selena Gomez had the highest number of followers with a total of approximately 125 million. On the other hand, The Rock and Kylie Jenner had the lowest numbers, which is nearly 90 million followers. Cristiano Ronaldo and Ariana Grande had almost the same number of followers in 2018. That is about 110 million.

      The number of followers in 2021 had increased tremendously for Cristiano Ronaldo with the highest of approximately 310 millions followers. The lowest in the trend was Selena Gomez, with almost 240 million followers. All the other influencers show the same digit, that is 250 million.

      The bar graph clearly shows that each celebrity’s popularity had increased at a very high pace since 2018; they have touched or are near 250 million in 2021; the exception here is Criastiano Ronaldo whose popularity had beaten all records and gone above 300 million followers on Instagram.

      – Few grammatical errors.

      -Try to write your graph in past when dates are given.

      -Use cohesive devices.

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  • Ankkush

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    July 1, 2022 at 12:00 PM
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    The given bar chart explains the popularity of influential figures on Instagram between 2081 and 2021.

    Here, we can see the bar chart is consist of four renowned celebrities such as Cristiano Ronaldo, The Rock, Ariana Grande, Kylie Jenner and Selena Gomez. From the bar chart we can see, in 2018, Selena Gomez had the highest number of followers with a total of approximately 125 million while The Rock had the lowest number of fans with roughly 90 million. Cristiano Ronaldo, Ariana Grande and Kylie Jenner had followers around 100 million.

    However, in 2018 Cristiano Ronaldo has got the highest number of fans with more than 300 million while Selena Gomes scored the lowest number of followers with a number of 240 million approximately. Other figures like The Rock, Ariana Grande and Kylie Gomez got have also got a good hike in terms of followers as they also have around 250 million followers on Instagram.

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    @fal mam, please check this.

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