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  • Essay task 2

    Posted by Aishwarya on August 3, 2021 at 3:45 PM

    In some countries more and more people are becoming interested about finding about history of house or building they live in

    What are reasons for this?

    How can people research this?

    NIL Admin replied 11 months, 1 week ago 2 Members · 2 Replies
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  • Aishwarya

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    August 3, 2021 at 3:47 PM
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    It is becoming more of a trend for people to invest time to find about the historical significance of the place they live in. This essay will discuss the causes of rising interest of people in previous history of their houses and various methods to accomplish this.

    Nowadays people are more intrigued by the history of a place inhabited by them because the new generation is more interested in connecting with roots. Not only does this give them a sense of belonging, but also gives them a chance to connect to the place they live in.Moreover, some people think that knowing about the historic significance, makes them appreciate the place more .for example people make sure to ask the neighbors about the place they live in so that they can adjust to the surrounding.

    With the advent of information technology, it has become effortless for people to dig about the past of property they are planning to buy. Not only there are specific websites,, but also you can look up any place on Google and get stories related to that place. Although many people prefer to get information from old newspapers or the neighbors still a significant number of people are hiring private investigators to learn about the previous history of their houses. For example, most of my friends buy property only after looking at historyproperty.com, a very reliable website for getting details about properties. Hence, nowadays one can effortlessly get facts about buildings with information technology.

    In summary, this essay discussed the reasons why it is important for people to know about the places they live and multifarious method to obtain data about those places.

    • NIL Admin

      Administrator
      August 3, 2021 at 9:11 PM
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      Activity Points 7060

      No approach to the writing is good, however the examples in the first paragraph do not do justice. Examples that you had mentioned is very generic.

      Do not start the second paragraph without a cohesive device.

      The sentence construction is good lexical resources are also maintained properly.

      Band Score: 5.0/6.0

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