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  • Essay Writing

    Posted by Nida on September 20, 2022 at 9:15 AM

    <font size=”2″ face=”Arial”>Some people think that spending a lot of money on wedding parties and other celebrations is just a waste. Others, however, think that such events are necessary, so spending money on them is acceptable.
    <font size=”2″ face=”Arial”>Discuss both the views and give your opinion.</font>

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    Celebrating important events of one’s life and including loved ones in our happiness always brings joy but going overboard with expenditures can also lead unwanted to financial crisis.

    Humans are social animals and therefore need to have their loved ones nearby in sadness and happiness. Due to work responsibilities and other situations families have scattered throughout the globe. They hardly get to meet and when they do they are almost never all at one place. Organizing big events like a marriage ceremony or birthdays gives a joyful reason for all to come and enjoy it together. Friends and family gather in good spirits and make memories to be cherished. My cousin recently got married this summer and that gave us an opportunity to meet my uncle’s family whom I haven’t met in ages. It was amazing to meet the then little toddlers who are now college going boys.

    Some people tend to overspend as they overlook the point that the reason of celebration is getting together at one place rather organizing the expensive parties. These days people tend to compete with each other in terms that who can throw a more lavish party. They spend picking foreign destination, costly decoration, vast food menus, long guests list, expensive return gifts and even celebrity performances. This leads to people running under heavy debts and financial distress which eventually leads to emotional and physical problems too. Recently my friend’s father ran under heavy debts after organizing a wedding party in Italy as he paid for tickets for all the people attending.

    In conclusion, celebration of an events like marriages or birthdays should be focused more individuals rather than mindless spending spree. They should be celebrated with close friends and family rather than having people who hardly know the hosts.

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    Falak replied 1 year, 8 months ago 2 Members · 1 Reply
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  • Falak

    September 23, 2022 at 7:30 AM

    lead unwanted to financial crisis. (lead to unwanted financial crisis.)

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