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  • General writing group 8pm Ipshita9

    Posted by Ipshita on August 11, 2021 at 8:21 PM

    You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

    You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t stay the whole course.

    Write a letter to the course director. In your letter,

    1.explain your interest in the course

    2.describe your problems

    3.find out if a refund is possible

    Write at least 150 words.

    You do NOT need to write any addresses.

    Ipshita replied 10 months, 4 weeks ago 2 Members · 2 Replies
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  • Athira

    Member
    August 11, 2021 at 8:51 PM
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    Dear Mr.Stewart,

    I am writing this letter about my admission to the summer batch of tennis course. I have some concerns to convey regarding the same.

    The primary reason for my interest in the course is that I am a sports aficionado and really want to get underway with tennis. But I couldn’t get hold of a suitable course until I came across the advertisement for your course. It was a laborious process to sketch out a plan and make room for the course in my busy schedule. I could finally fish out some time for the practice.

    I was ready to take the plunge when things changed course. My wife is a medical practitioner and she needs to travel next month for a 6-week medical camp. The camp was decided to be held later this year, so I hoped to complete the course by that time. But now I need to take care of our children while she’s away and manage my full-time job as well. This means that I would not be able to complete the course if I join this month.

    Due to the unprecedented shift in circumstances, I would like to withdraw my admission to the course. I have paid the course fee in advance; hence I would like to know about the possibility of a refund. I hope the refund would not be an issue as the course has not commenced yet. I am expecting a positive response to my concern.

    Best Regards,

    Athira Nair

    • Ipshita

      Administrator
      August 11, 2021 at 9:05 PM
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      Activity Points 4890

      I am writing this letter about my admission to the summer batch of tennis course. I have some concerns to convey regarding the same.

      The primary reason for my interest in the course is that being a tennis aficionado, I want to get underway with tennis. However, I couldn’t get hold of a suitable course until I came across the advertisement for this course. It was a laborious process to sketch out a plan and make room for this course in my busy schedule. I could finally fish out some time for the practice.

      I was ready to take the plunge when things changed course. Being a medical practitioner, my wife needs to travel next month for a 6-week medical camp. The camp was decided to be held later this year, so I hoped to complete the course by that time. Although now I need to take care of our children as she would be away, besides managing my full-time job. Consequently, it would be impossible for me to complete the course if I join this month.

      Due to the unprecedented shift in circumstances, I would like to withdraw my admission to the course. I have paid the course fee in advance; hence I would like to know about the possibility of a refund. I hope the refund would not be an issue as the course has not commenced yet. I am expecting a positive response to my concern.

      Best Regards,

      8 band score

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