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  • General writing part 1 group 8pm Ipshita 1

    Posted by Ipshita on June 30, 2021 at 8:23 PM

    You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

    You are going on a short training course at a college in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there.

    Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter,

    explain your situation describe the accommodation you require say when you will need it

    Write at least 150 words.

    You do NOT need to write any addresses.

    Begin your letter as follows:

    Dear Ms Rose,

    NIL Admin replied 11 months, 2 weeks ago 7 Members · 6 Replies
  • 6 Replies
  • Abhishek

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    June 30, 2021 at 9:16 PM
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    Hello Sir,

    Warm Greetings,

    I hope this mail will find you in the pink of health & spirit. This is with reference to the admission letter which I have received last week for short training course at Ireland campus. The letter has all the required details related to the course, fees, curriculum etc. except the information for accommodation.

    I will be leaving my place for the campus on the coming Monday. It would be great if you help me with the information related to my accommodation during the course. As per the form I submitted, I would require single occupancy with attached washroom. I have already remitted fees for it but still waiting for the confirmation of allotment.

    I hope you will able to provide me this information as soon as possible so that It wont be a problem for us when I will reach the campus.

    For your reference, I have attached hotel fees receipt also, please find it hereby.

    Eagerly looking forward to your response.

    Best Regards,

    Abhishek

  • Rashmi

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    June 30, 2021 at 9:37 PM
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    Dear Ms Rose,

    This is Rashmi Shrivastava, I am bit fortunate to join trainee program in Collage in Greenmount. I am pleased to write you because you are the first person whom I am contacting in this collage.

    The purpose to write this mail, If you can advise me about accommodations nearby collage or if there is any availability within college campus as I am foreign student and shifting from another country, not familiar with the place.

    So basically, I am looking for shared accommodation with two persons capacity it should have two rooms if room size is small it will work along with attached bathroom and small kitchen. Kitchen should have basic things like microwave and water purifier. I am also fine with one studio apartment along with attached bathroom and kitchen with basic things.

    As I am joining as student so my budget will be in between 600-800 dollar . If accommodation is not available in college then it should be nearby college. So I could use library in odd hours.

    My session will commence in April 3<sup>nd</sup> week. I will be planning to reach there in early March, before reaching if you could advise few accommodations so I can connect and can have virtual tour. It will help me to make fast decision and before reaching I could narrow down the options as it will help me to save some money and time.

    Your Sincerely

    Rashmi

  • Mayukh

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    June 30, 2021 at 9:41 PM
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    Dear Mr. Hen,

    This is to inform you that I am looking forward for an accommodation at Greenmount College’s Hostel as I got selected for the six months short training course on “Negotiation Skill Enhancement” (NSE) at your college.

    According to the invitation mail that I have received on last Saturday, i.e, 26th June 2021, the course is going to get started from 1st of August 2021. Hence, I should be present in Northern Ireland at least one week prior the course starts.

    As I belong to India, for me, Ireland is totally a new destination. Thus, it will be a great help if you can provide me an accommodation at your hostel for the entire course period of six months, i.e., from 26th July 2021 Till 5th February 2021. I would also like to bring to your notice that I prefer a single room with attached toilet.

    Therefore, I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest convenience.

    Yours Faithfully,

    Mayukh Ghosh

    [Phone No: +91-9735811877]

  • Rekha

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    June 30, 2021 at 9:44 PM
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    Dear Miss Rose

    I Rekha Singh would like to have a room in your hostel for a period of six months, I don’t mind sharing it with any female roommates.

    It will be highly appreciated if you could provide me accommodation with few amenities like , I need a study table with night lamp,shelves for my books and belonging . It should be less noisy and peaceful so that I can focus on my work.

    My school management will be allotting me house within six months time so, I will be moving as soon as I get it.

    I’m a vegan, so I would prefer only vegetarian food . There should be power backups, maid to clean the room atleast on alternate days and free from any insects.

    I’ll will be going out with my friends on weekends so ,I would like to keep my things in lockers and rest to be taken good care.

  • Eman

    Member
    July 19, 2021 at 8:34 PM
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    Dear Ms. Rose,

    I am visiting the King college in Greenmount, Northern Ireland next semester for a short training course that was registered for it by the general bank in Qatar. Therefore, I need to arrange for a place to live during my visit. The registration office asked me to contact you to arrange for the accommodation during September.

    I will be alone, so a shared apartment or a single-bedroom apartment would be acceptable. Since it is going to be summertime, a cooling system would be an asset in the place that I will live in. Another thing, in order to get to my class easily, I prefer to have the location near the campus if available of course.

    As I mentioned earlier, my course will start in the first week of September, so it would be better if I get the place ready to move in by mid of August. I will reach Northern Ireland by the end of August to prepare for the course and hopefully settle in the place that I will live in.

    I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

    Yours faithfully,

    Eman Rashed

    • NIL Admin

      Administrator
      July 19, 2021 at 8:38 PM
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      Excellent writing

      Band Score: 3.0/3.0

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