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  • General writing part 1 Ipshita 8pm8

    Posted by Ipshita on July 30, 2021 at 7:58 PM

    Do not spend more than 20 minutes

    Marina has just started a new course at college and her tutor has asked her to write him a letter telling him something about herself.

    1. personal information

    2. educational qualification

    3.choice of course

    Write at least 150words.

    Ipshita replied 11 months, 1 week ago 8 Members · 14 Replies
  • 14 Replies
  • Achal

    Member
    July 30, 2021 at 8:27 PM
    0 Network Points
    Activity Points 250

    Dear Sir/Madam,

    Firstly, I would like to tell you that i am really enjoying classes at college. I am writing this letter in response to provide you information about myself.

    To begin with, My full name is Marina John, and i am Indian citizen. I am born and brought up in Mumbai and i am 24 years old and i am also working as junior engineer in one of the multinational companies in Mumbai.

    Now i would like to give my educational background, I have recently completed my bachelor’s degree in computer science from Pune University in year 2021 with honours.

    I am choosing a diploma in Artificial Intelligence & Machine Learning because first, i have lot of interest in state-of-the-art technologies, secondly, I see that in our future there would be lot of demand for automation, robotics etc and I see that this college is highly reputed and famous for research in this field. I follow interviews/talks as well from some of the professors from this college and they blow my mind with their knowledge and research in AI, hence, I decided to choose this course in this college.

    Please let me know if you need any more information.

    Sincerely,

    Marina

    • Ipshita

      Administrator
      July 31, 2021 at 9:40 PM
      30 Network Points
      Activity Points 4870

      Dear Sir/Madam,

      Firstly, I would like to tell you that I am enjoying classes at college. I am writing this letter in response to provide you with information about myself.

      My full name is Marina John, and I am an Indian citizen. I am born and brought up in Mumbai. I am 24 years old. I am also working as a junior engineer in one of the multinational companies in Mumbai.

      Now I would like to give some information about my educational background. I have recently completed my bachelor’s degree in computer science from Pune University in the year 2021 with honours.

      I am choosing a diploma in Artificial Intelligence & Machine Learning because first. I have a lot of interest in state-of-the-art technologies.

      Furthermore, I can foresee that there would be a lot of demand for automation, robotics etc. I see that this college is highly reputed and famous for research in this field. I follow interviews/talks of some of the professors from this college and they blow my mind with their knowledge and research in AI. Hence, I decided to choose this course in this college.

      Please let me know if you need any more information.

      Sincerely,

      Marina

      6.5 band score

  • Athira

    Member
    July 30, 2021 at 8:35 PM
    0 Network Points
    Activity Points 200

    Dear Sir,

    I am Marina Greene, the Software Development (DevOps) freshman student whom you met this morning. As I have been asked, this letter is intended to tell you something about myself.

    I recently moved to the city for the course and I’m living with my aunt, two streets down North Avenue. My aunt’s Cecilia Greene and will be my local guardian. You can contact her for any requirements that need parental involvement.

    I have a bachelor’s degree in computer science – with a DevOps specialization from Liverpool John Moores University, UK. All of my schoolings were back in my hometown, North Yorkshire, England. I have signed up to work part-time in a book store near the college, where I work 4 hours all weekdays after college.

    I have chosen this course due to my zeal for DevOps. I strongly believe that DevOps practices need to reach all fields of software development. It has the potential to bring a major transformation to the way IT projects work. I am enthusiastic to dive deeper into the field with this course.

    I hope that our time here would enrich my knowledge of the key concepts. I am also mindful of my duties as a student. It was a pleasure meeting you today.

    Thanks,

    Marina

    • Ipshita

      Administrator
      July 31, 2021 at 9:54 PM
      30 Network Points
      Activity Points 4870

      I am Marina Greene, the Software Development (DevOps) freshman student whom you met this morning. I am writing this letter intending to tell you something about myself.

      I recently moved to the city for the course. I’m living with my aunt, two streets down North Avenue. My aunt’s Cecilia Greene and will be my local guardian. You can contact her for any requirements that need parental involvement.

      I have a bachelor’s degree in computer science – with a DevOps specialization from Liverpool John Moores University, UK. All of my schoolings were back in my hometown, North Yorkshire, England. I have signed up to work part-time in a book store near the college, where I work 4 hours all weekdays after college.

      I have chosen this course due to my zeal for DevOps. I strongly believe that DevOps practices need to reach all fields of software development. It has the potential to bring a major transformation to the way IT projects work. I am enthusiastic enough to plunge deeper into the field with this course.

      I hope that our time here would enrich my knowledge of the key concepts. I am also mindful of my duties as a student. It was a pleasure meeting you today.

      8.5 band score

  • Shafi

    Member
    July 30, 2021 at 8:37 PM
    0 Network Points
    Activity Points 400

    Respected Sir,

    This is Marina, my reg no is D7893, I am second year computer’s student from AU college. I am born and bought up in Hyderabad. I have completed my education till 12th in Bangalore. after my primary education i have found my interests in computer’s. I have developed some hobbies like book reading and poetry. I enjoy cycling whenever i go to my grandma’s place.

    As i have mentioned earlier, I have completed my primary education from Bangalore. I am a bright student and have scored good grades. I have also earned scholarship for my academic performance in my first year of my college.

    My parents are also from computer’s background which motivated me to choose this program. Both my dad and mom work as instructors in a government college. I find some of the courses difficult in my current term, so i want to seek help from a tutor.

    Thank you,

    Marina

    • Ipshita

      Administrator
      July 31, 2021 at 9:58 PM
      30 Network Points
      Activity Points 4870

      This is Marina. My reg no is D7893. I am a second-year computer’s student from AU college. I am born and bought up in Hyderabad. I have completed my education till 12th in Bangalore. after my primary education, I have found my interest in computers. I have developed some hobbies like book reading and poetry. I enjoy cycling whenever I go to my grandma’s place.

      As I have mentioned earlier, I have completed my primary education in Bangalore. I am a bright student and have scored good grades. I have also earned a scholarship for my academic performance in my first year of my college.

      I hail from a family of computer engineers, which motivated me to choose this program. Both my dad and mom work as instructors in a government college. I find some of the courses difficult in my current term, so I want to seek help from a tutor.

      6.5 band score

  • jaisal

    Member
    July 30, 2021 at 8:40 PM
    0 Network Points
    Activity Points 150

    Hello Dr. Smith,

    My name is Marina, I am 25 years old and I belong to the state of Rajasthan, India. I like to fritter away my time reading books and my favourite genre is science fiction. Apart from that I love playing basketball and gazing the stars at night while listening to bollywood numbers.

    I have completed my bachelors degree in science from Rajasthan University in the year of 2020 with top of the class achievement. Since then I have been working with Randall Brothers Microlimited as a research developer.

    Working there I came across your research works on structure of proteins and their folding mechanism. It ignited curiosity in me and I felt like learning more and that’s when I came across the 6 months diploma course on Structure of Proteins in your current college of working. I grabbed the opportunity and applied for the same. Thankfully I got selected to be one of your pupil and I am looking forward to the class starting on Monday.

    Thank You

    • Ipshita

      Administrator
      July 31, 2021 at 9:50 PM
      30 Network Points
      Activity Points 4870

      Hello Dr Smith,

      My name is Marina. I am 25 years old and, I belong to the state of Rajasthan, India. I like to fill my time reading books. My favourite genre is science fiction. Apart from that, I love playing basketball and gazing at the stars at night while listening to Bollywood numbers.

      I hold a bachelor’s degree in science from Rajasthan University in 2020 with top of the class achievement. Since then, I have been working with Randall Brothers Microlimited as a research developer.

      While working at Randall Brothers Microlimited, I came across your research works on the structure of proteins and their folding mechanism. It ignited curiosity in me and, I felt like learning more about it. That’s when I came across the 6-monthly diploma course on Structure of Proteins in your current college of working. I grabbed the opportunity and applied for the same. Thankfully I got selected to be one of your pupils and I am looking forward to the class starting on Monday.

      Thank You

      6.5 band score

  • Jyoti

    Member
    July 30, 2021 at 8:42 PM
    10 Network Points
    Activity Points 350

    Good evening sir,

    I am writing this letter to inform you that I am starting a new course at G.L. school of management in Mumbai and I am very excited to begin this new journey under your guidance.

    I come from a small city in Rajasthan where most of the people are employed in agricultural industry. I work as a medical officer in a rural area serving the people who are in utmost need of the healthcare services. I have a keen interest in arts and I use most of my leisure time to paint my heart out.

    I have done my MBBS from Dr. S. N. medical College, Jodhpur and have recently graduated in March 2020. I have an 18 months of work experience here in Rajasthan and I am currently studying part-time online course about molecular genetics from Texila University for which I have managed to publish two research papers and this course will complete by August 15

    I wish to commence ‘The Healthcare management’ program offered by GLSN in fall of 2021. I believe that I should learn basic management skills in order to help the government in developing healthcare infrastructure at the grassroot level and I am very confident that your direction will show me the path to my future endeavours.

    Regards,

    Marina

    • Ipshita

      Administrator
      July 31, 2021 at 10:25 PM
      30 Network Points
      Activity Points 4870

      I am writing this letter to inform you that I am starting a new course at the G.L. school of management in Mumbai. I am very excited to begin this new journey under your guidance.

      I come from a small city in Rajasthan where most people are employed in the agricultural industry. I work as a medical officer in a rural area serving the people in utmost need of healthcare services. I have a keen interest in the arts. I use most of my leisure time to paint my heart out.

      I hold an MBBS degree from Dr S. N. Medical College, Jodhpur. I recently graduated in March 2020. I have 18 months of work experience here in Rajasthan. I am currently studying a part-time online course about molecular genetics from Texila University for which I have managed to publish two research papers. This course will get terminated on August 15.

      I wish to commence the ‘The Healthcare management’ program offered by GLSN in the fall of 2021. I believe that I should learn basic management skills to help the government in developing healthcare infrastructure at the grassroots level. I am very confident that your direction will show me the path to my future endeavours.

      6.5 band score

  • Rekha

    Member
    July 30, 2021 at 8:43 PM
    0 Network Points
    Activity Points 500

    Dear Mrs. Williams

    I am happy to share some of my personal information with you. I come from Hindu conservative family with high values. My grandparents were farmers and we do have farm land. My father is retired from Navy and my mom is home manager. My siblings are working with private firm, elder one is specialized in medicine and younger one is high court lawyer. I work with small kids in a primary school having CBSE board. It’s been 7 years since I took up this profession. I have worked with school having inclusive education policy. My strength is in science and maths at primary level.

    My schooling is done in English medium having CBSE board. I did my Degree in Commerce from M.G.University Kottayam, Kerala in the year 2005,I have done my Masters in commerce from Goa University in the year 2007 with specialization in accounts and finance, I have recently completed my B.ed also. My education is in English medium. I too have Montessori degree in child care and phycology.

    At present I’m perusing my doctorate in early childhood and nutrient form Finnish college of child development in Finland. For this, I have been attending workshops and seminars organized by the college inside and outside the campus. It’s really very interesting to be with this small kids and read their minds.

    Take good care of yourself

    With warm regards

    Rekha Singh

    • Ipshita

      Administrator
      July 31, 2021 at 10:31 PM
      30 Network Points
      Activity Points 4870

      I am happy to share some of my personal information with you. I come from a Hindu conservative family with high values. My grandparents were farmers and we do have farmland. My father is retired from the Navy and my mom is a homemaker. My siblings are working with a private firm. While the elder one has a specialization in medicine, the younger one is a high court lawyer. I work with small kids in a primary school having a CBSE board. It’s been 7 years since I took up this profession. I have worked with schools having inclusive education policies. My strength is in science and maths at the primary level.

      My schooling is done in English medium having CBSE board. I did my Degree in Commerce from M.G.University Kottayam, Kerala in the year 2005, I have done my Masters in commerce from Goa University in the year 2007 with specialization in accounts and finance, I have recently completed my B.ed also. My education is in the English medium. I too have a Montessori degree in child care and phycology.

      At present, I’m perusing my doctorate in early childhood and nutrition from the Finnish college of child development in Finland. For this, I have been attending workshops and seminars organized by the college inside and outside the campus. It’s very interesting to be with these small kids and read their minds.

      6 band score

  • Mayukh

    Member
    July 30, 2021 at 8:44 PM
    0 Network Points
    Activity Points 800

    Dear Sir,

    With reference to our yesterday’s one-to-one discussion, I am writing this letter, in order to make myself known to you. In this letter I will be sharing my personal information, my educational qualification and the course that I opted to study, at your College.

    At first I would like to introduce myself. My name is Mayukh Ghosh, I am married and at present I am living with my wife and my daughter and we hail from India. In India I belong to Kolkata, which is the capital of West Bengal.

    About my educational qualification, I have completed my post-graduation in Marketing from Master School Of Management, Meerut, and prior to that I have completed my graduation in Biochemistry from Osmania University, Hyderabad.

    I am having 12 years of full-time work experience in the sales & marketing department in medical devices, where I dealt with the capital equipment from the field of Ophthalmology. In the month of March 2021, I have left my job and have decided to pursue a Master’s Degree Programme in ‘Digital Marketing from the Imperial College, London.

    I have attached my CV along with this letter. Hope this information will help you to know me better.

    Thanking you in anticipation, if you require any further information please contact me on the below number.

    Yours faithfully,

    Mayukh Ghosh

    [Phone Number: ##########]

    • Ipshita

      Administrator
      July 31, 2021 at 10:35 PM
      30 Network Points
      Activity Points 4870

      Concerning our yesterday’s one-to-one discussion, I am writing this letter, to make myself known to you. I am writing this letter to share my personal information, educational qualification and the course that I opted to study, at your College.

      At first, I would like to introduce myself. My name is Mayukh Ghosh. I am married. Currently, I am living with my wife and my daughter. I hail from Kolkata, West Bengal, India.

      About my educational qualification, I have completed my post-graduation in Marketing from Master School Of Management, Meerut, and prior to that, I have completed my graduation in Biochemistry from Osmania University, Hyderabad.

      I am having 12 years of full-time work experience in the sales & marketing department in medical devices, where I dealt with the capital equipment from the field of Ophthalmology. In March 2021, I have left my job and have decided to pursue a Master’s Degree Programme in ‘Digital Marketing from the Imperial College, London.

      I have attached my CV along with this letter. Hope this information will help you to know me better.

      Thanking you in anticipation, if you require any further information please contact me on the below number.

      Yours faithfully,

      7 band score

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