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  • General writing part 1 Ipshita 8pm9

    Posted by Ipshita on August 6, 2021 at 8:05 PM

    You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

    You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems.

    Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter,

    1.explain your situation <div>

    2.describe your problems

    3.tell him/her when you think you can move in

    Write at least 150 words.

    You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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    Ipshita replied 11 months ago 3 Members · 4 Replies
  • 4 Replies
  • Achal

    Member
    August 6, 2021 at 8:32 PM
    0 Network Points
    Activity Points 250

    Dear Mr. John,

    Greetings hope all is well at your side.

    First, I would like to thank you for accepting me into the institute and helping me to find a suitable apartment for my stay during my study.

    As informed earlier, I am in the process of getting my study visa, and I was supposed to move to the UK by 1st August, but it seems that due to the corona pandemic, my study permit is taking longer time as consulate general of the UK in Delhi is closed now and most of their employees are working from home. Due to this, the entire process has got slower.

    Yesterday I called the consulate and they informed me that it will take another one week for processing my visa and that means I must change my plan and postpone my flight by one week.

    I am now supposed to land in the UK by 7th August, and I would like to move into the same apartment. Therefore, I request you if you can speak to the landlord and explain my situation.

    Looking forward to your response.

    Thanks,

    Achal

    • Ipshita

      Administrator
      August 6, 2021 at 8:46 PM
      30 Network Points
      Activity Points 4880

      First, I would like to thank you for accepting me into the institute and helping me to find a suitable apartment for my stay during my study.

      As informed earlier, I am in the process of getting my study visa, and I was supposed to move to the UK by 1st August. Due to the pandemic, the consulate general of the UK in Delhi is closed. Currently, most of their employees are working from home. Consequently, my study permit is taking a long time to process. Due to this, the entire process has got slower.

      Yesterday, I called the consulate and, they informed me that it would take another week to process my visa. As a result, I have to change my plan and postpone my flight by one week.

      I am now supposed to land in the UK by 7th August, and I would like to move into the same apartment. Therefore, I request you if you can speak to the landlord and explain my situation.

      Looking forward to your response.

      6.5 band score

  • Rittika

    Member
    August 6, 2021 at 8:41 PM
    0 Network Points
    Activity Points 200

    Dear Sir/Ma’am

    This is to inform you that I enrolled for the course in your university on 17th July 2021 and I raised the request for the rented apartment which was accepted. I am thankful to get the swift reply on my request, however, I won’t be able to move in the apartment next month due to some problems.

    Although, I have completed all the documentation process for moving to Australia but I forgot to check my college transcript which is going to expire after 2 days. Hence, I have to visit the university and request for the new transcript. I tried to request some seniors in the university to provide the transcript as soon as possible but they asked me to wait for a month. I planned to take the flight next week but I have to cancel it due to this unforeseen circumstances.

    I apologize for the delay and request you to extend the time for 2 months, I will be reaching there in the month of October.

    Regards

    Ritika

    • Ipshita

      Administrator
      August 6, 2021 at 8:51 PM
      30 Network Points
      Activity Points 4880

      This is to inform you that I enrolled on the course at your university on 17th July 2021. I raised the request for the rented apartment and, the institution accepted it. I am thankful to receive a swift reply to my request. However, I won’t be able to move into the apartment next month due to some problems.

      Although I have completed all the documentation process for moving to Australia, I forgot to check my college transcript that would expire in 2 days. Hence, I have to visit the university and request a new transcript. I requested some seniors in the university to provide the transcript as soon as possible but they asked me to wait for a month. I planned to take the flight next week but I have to cancel it due to these unforeseen circumstances.

      I apologize for the delay and request you to extend the time for 2 months, I will be reaching there in October.

      6.5 band score

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