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  • General writing part 2

    Posted by Ipshita on May 17, 2022 at 9:06 PM

    You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

    Write about the following topic:

    Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring?

    What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?

    Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

    Write at least 250 words.

    Ipshita replied 1 month, 2 weeks ago 2 Members · 2 Replies
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  • Sripriyadharshini

    Member
    May 17, 2022 at 9:37 PM
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    Activity Points 500

    Zoos are places where animals are let to be inside a cage where they don’t get enough freedom to enjoy on their own as like they are in the forest. The zoos are making profits from visitors but they are unaware that animals of different species may get attacked, infected, they may develop mental issues. Zoos are not maintained properly as visitors sometimes they even throw foods to the animals that might affect animals health too. Behaviour of animals might change keeping them in limited spaces and will not help in breeding. Bringing the rare species to zoos may lead to extinct of that species.

    Some of the alternative ways to avoid zoos are Wildlife sanctuaries or parks which is more popular in today’s world, where the environment is same as like the forest. Even tigers and lions are kept in many places like they are living in the forest. We can even watch the animals in our TV programs sitting in our home.

    I don’t say that we don’t want zoos as most people have negative impact on zoos. Zoos can have the atmosphere of how they live in the forest because we may not experience in watching the extinct species and zoo keepers should maintain the zoos as animals are not harmed at any purpose.

  • Ipshita

    Administrator
    May 17, 2022 at 9:51 PM
    30 Network Points
    Activity Points 4880

    Zoos are places where animals are let to be inside a cage where they don’t get enough freedom to enjoy themselves on their own as they are in the forest. The zoos are making profits from visitors but they are unaware that animals of different species may get attacked or infected, and they may have developmental issues. They may also get psychologically affected as they are confined for a longer period of time. Zoos are not maintained properly as visitors sometimes even throw food at the animals which might affect animals’ health too. The behaviour of animals might change keeping them in limited spaces and will not help in breeding younger ones. Bringing the rare species to zoos may lead to the extinction of that species.

    Some of the alternative ways to avoid zoos are Wildlife sanctuaries or parks which are more popular in today’s world, where the environment is the same as the forest. Even tigers and lions are kept in many places like they are living in the forest. We can even watch the animals in our TV programs sitting in our homes.

    I don’t say that we don’t want zoos as most people have a negative impact on zoos. Zoos can have the atmosphere of how they live in the forest because we may not experience watching the extinct species and zookeepers should maintain the zoos as animals are not harmed for any purpose.

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