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  • IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Keeping pets is good)

    Posted by Chandan on July 7, 2021 at 6:09 PM

    Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy.


    Which opinion do you agree with?
    Discuss both options and give examples.

    Chandan replied 11 months, 3 weeks ago 2 Members · 2 Replies
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  • shakshi

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    July 8, 2021 at 5:13 PM
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    It is illustrated that humans and pets stay together which is good for children. However, people think it is dangerous and harmful. Domestic animals and humans have lived together since ancient times, thus, I agree with the opinion that keeping pets at home is satisfactory for children.

    Pets are mostly lovable and best companion that human has in this universe. All over the world, pets have made a remarkable position in families as their love and devotion with owners is extravagant and memorable. I have personally noticed the same, my child who is 1.5 years old loves a dog and cats. I can see my dog and my son play together and even sometimes eat on one plate, their bonding and affection to each other is inexpressible. In this era, where people are depressed and anxious, pets are the only domestic animal which can understand human psychology and try to make us happy and calm.

    Secondly, In my opinion, domestic animals can be dangerous and harmful for children. The reason behind this that they give you so much love which sometimes causes infection for children. Once in a year, when dog fur peals out that spread massive hair which leads to an unhealthy life for children. For example, when I was 10 years old, and visited my friend’s house in India. While entering the house I saw a dog that was not able to move because he was suffering from a skin disease. He was staying alone and no children were allowed to meet him.

    In the conclusion, Keeping pets at home is good but we should give them a healthy and caring life and as they give to us.

    • Chandan

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      July 14, 2021 at 5:55 PM
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      Feedback: Effort is good but an essay needs to be written on the basis of it’s parameters wherein found less use of content along with related words. Need to work on execution as and discussion part more rather personal opinion as found personalised essay instead generalised.

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